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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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Thrift Shop Foreshadowing

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

– In this piece of prose poetry, nocturnal epiphanies suggest such frontiers of exploration and understanding are far from achieving empirical finality. (Image by Ade Santoro)

Tuesday, January 6, 2015


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Thrift Store Foreshadowing
by Odin Roark

Inventory of past life inventories
Poised in dress-parade attention
Obliging his obligatory inspection,
Seeking the suit that would fit him well,
Avoiding the over-priced,
Cleaned and pressed,
Yet with frayed collar conspiracy
Luridly foisting their prominence
Beneath overhead fluorescents.

About the store,
Bathed in mist-like dust mites and hidden cobwebs,
Dummies dressed in street-window conceit,
Stood like Nutcracker soldiers
Their Mona Lisa eyes tracking his every move.

As rickety fans stirred the summer’s air,
Racks of faded dresses sashayed to and fro from hangers,
Not knowing he was of manly preference,
Even though…

Racks of shirts and ties waved
As he hurriedly sought an exit.
Dead men’s boots and shoes vied for his attention,
As sweat-stained Stetsons rolled along the floor,
Chasing him back to his slumber,
Where his time to wake meant quashing the noisy Big Boy alarm,
Following his ritual of shit, shower and shave,
And the daily venture into the real world of fear.

Sadly…

His analyst, the only known confidant, gave little credence to the dream,
Until having to identify his still body at the morgue,
Her doubt developed a bit more dream consciousness,
Insomnia becoming her constant companion.


 


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Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Dreamy poetic lines mixed with reality bites. Like having a hot fudge sandwich with mustard and ketchup. Just does not mix. Reality bites.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
I can imagine this being a short film with all of its ghastly images. Certainly a thriller for me, as one who dusts off old images and dons them while searching through history.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 7, 2015
Indeed a piece educed from experiment and observation rather than theory. The image compliments the style and spirit of your (perhaps) black and white vignettes. This, at once, reminded me of Raymond Chandler; a writer I've always enjoyed. Excellent! Peace...


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