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Dawn Forever Ascending

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For those who may not have had the experience of NY living, rest assured, there's a "city" magic in what I’ve attempted to translate into prose poetry. And for anyone, although made into a cliché by many, there is still credence to the idea of inner light…even in Manhattan.

Tuesday, January 13, 2015


Poem Artwork
Dawn Forever Ascending
by Odin Roark

5am

Uptown.
Downtown.

Street lights fade,
their tiny soft-winged tenants flee,
checkerboard facades change,
last night's illumined streetlamps now dark
become yet another yesterday,
some gleaming,
some weather-streaked,
all waiting to help reflect another eve’s breath.

Steam ascends from the city's vacuum,
gratings rattle with subterranean yawning,
people-movers wind their way
through mazes of starts,
stops.

6am

Topside tracks,
like fixed contrails,
glisten with frost,
not yet enjoined by speeding transit,
their skeletal tributaries
to deliver the rush of humanity
into Manhattan’s massive glass and steel survival.

A street sweeper's tire rubber and swirling brushes,
Maneuvered by an early-rise wage earner
holds firm the wheel and gears
gathering gutter-lodged disposables,
glass and plastic,
paper and cardboard,
cans and assorted feces
spin into the everyday vortex,
lifting yesterday's careless cast-offs,
making way for today's carelessness anew,
civilized reflections of another kind.

7am

Leashes strain with anxious sniffing,
bladders hold,
ready to burst,
seeking just the right tree,
the right hydrant,
the "ah, yes" that only a canine can know.

Rays of sun begin spilling down alleyways,
the long-tail rodents scamper for cover,
their bellies full,
seeking safety after a long night of ancient ritual,
food of anything,
digestion of history,
all in a night's work.

8am

Full light cascades down avenues and streets
as itinerant pigeons and seagulls spread habitual wings,
ready to adore the steadies,
the loners,
park walkers,
window ledge elders,
homeless with crumbs,
envying the moneyed insomniacs
throwing baguettes gone stale
fit for few, a feast for many.
Suddenly the symphony of loving coos and warbles
bobbing heads with thank you
become a reciprocal bonding
perhaps only the lonely appreciate too well.

9am

Finally the city’s steel and glass achievements
come fully alive,
ushering in weepers and dreamers,
hands exchanging money
some for the pretzel vendor
more for the hedge fund taker
little for the cookie jar provider.

As the day winds down…

Most become but another tomorrow's yesterday,
knowing little of the other light
requiring no rising or setting,
illumination that never grows dim,
one’s forever light
always available for darkness,
forever reminding open and closed eyes;
one's inner dawn can be forever ascending.
 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 14, 2015
What a wonderful rendition of the changing of the guard as the sun tries to reach down the long alleys created by towering structures seeking the light of day!

I haven't been there that early but have driven through a sea of yellow cabs and triple parked to visit an upstairs apartment of a Wall Street mogul. I've walked the city in the warm fall light and had a wild night in Greenwich Village when it was too hot for anyone to sleep. Yes, NYC is a sight to behold and you are describing it well in these poems of its glory.

Love the photo… Dawn trying to peak in.

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on January 14, 2015
And for those of us who have only visited this metropolis--
What an astounding insight to this place that I have loved to visit and loved even more to leave.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 13, 2015
To me this is an exquisite and very real "insight" into what is surely one of the most vibrant cities in the world. I have a couple of friends who live there but I've never been. Thank you for sharing this gift, Odin. Love and peace to you,

Regis


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