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· A Sticky Conversation

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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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MIrage of Love

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– Making the case for subtext, consider: “Rhetoricians have always admitted that a writer’s success depends on three things: What is said, how it is said, and who says it. Of these, the least important is what is said; what is suggested is what counts.” Robert C. Pinckert (Image by Sapna)

Saturday, January 17, 2015


Poem Artwork
Mirage of Love
by Odin Roark

So many have perished
Struggling against infatuated tail winds,
The warning sands of drifted reality,
Making waste the perilous effort.

An innocent’s once unclouded vision
Becomes overcast, making the heart seek further,
Not knowing the quenching of thirst unreachable
Amidst the storm of a choking delusion.

Yet…

How persistent desire’s seduction,
This passion of will longing to drink of love’s elixir,
Unaware love requires not object
But pure awareness,
The beneficence of being in a state of love.

Some find…

Above the hot breath of passion
Resides the calm of rendezvous,
Where connection to the rapture,
Waits patiently for the traveler.

Still…

How tremulous the venture,
This seeking of libidinous reward,
This misadventure across the deserts of beauty,
Whose demands make waste the misinformed.

Such a map to consider.
Such a compass to contemplate
Such a reward only patience can deliver.
And still…

Thirst is a given.




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 18, 2015
While I'm somewhat confused, it seems that your poem is the never-ending dialogue between lust and love, their interconnection and the failure of those who try to separate the two.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 18, 2015
Can't agree with Robert C. Pinckert. However... the presence of subtext in a writers work, whether purposefully done or mysteriously infixed, allows the readers an opportunity to glean from, or perceive, the substrates in another's work. Sadly, in my experiences, far too many readers, on posting sites, have little cognition of, or caring for, this truly beautiful component. Too many are only interested in the surface aspects. Instead of reading to grow they read to associate. Reading without cerebration. Skimming over the words to get a gist of what's being said to garner just enough understanding to offer the writer something threadbare in response. Thankfully not every contributor adheres to this bane of superficiality. Using an analogy: The only part of the lake that's visible is the surface. But the real essence/life of the lake is below the surface, and one must dive into the lake to experience that. Unfortunately far too many are afraid of the water anymore. Good insight, Odin. Enjoyed.
Peace and continued inspiration...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 18, 2015
Thirst is a powerful thing.

Reviewed by lois christensen
Reviewed on January 17, 2015
It's not so much like that with me anymore - decided to go it alone, and feel much better that way, no obligations, no such hurts even, it's just meant to be. But this poem is very good and says it all


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