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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Time's Subtle Movement

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A prosetry “what if” of the planet’s technology leaping ahead exponentially, as change rapidly opts for yet more change. It’s easy to forget how little we require to satisfy this state of mind we’ve defined as happiness, and…how fleeting the unique moments can be.

Thursday, February 26, 2015


Poem Artwork
Time’s Subtle Movement
by Odin Roark

A mail boat hydroplanes along the coast,
carrying a single letter.

Tiny island shoreline sits seemingly idle.

Clouds gather,
skies darken,
dolphins cease jumping,
flotsam hugs wet sands.

Like a bleached leaf entangled in the yolk
of ancient driftwood antlers,
old dry newspaper headline holds fast;
"Manned Spacecraft Lands On Mars."

A single palm shades a pre-war colonial house,
the island's sole resident.

Threadbare cargo-shorts
hang limply on emaciated hips,
held up by aged leather tool belt.

Artist looks skyward,
pulls welding helmet down,
eyes peering through ocean-spotted lens
as solar panel energy
sparks welding torch.

Final stringer bead.

Hot pass.

Filler pass.

Cover pass.

Complete.

Artist raises head upwards as
two-story lightning bolt of welded iron,
secured in buried concrete pedestal,
casts fading shadows
as its waning reflection foretells
the impending weather.

Stepping backward off platform,
Artist lifts helmet,
assesses work.

Pointing eastward
like a rocket ready for count down,
the artist's passion readies its imaginary travel.

Instinct awakens…

There is menace riding wind and wave...
crisis coming.

Hovercraft arrives.
Its mini-hover comes ashore,
extending its robotic arm delivering a letter.
Artist sits and stares at envelope.

The sea suddenly becomes weary.
A nervous seagull lands on sculpture,
drops a white calling card.
Artist smiles.

Giant tortoise lumbers up,
settles beside artist,
head peeking out,
retreating,
waiting.

From his pocket,
artist lifts bark of coconut,
places in front of shell,
pleasure readily exercises a quick bite.

He glances back at envelope.

Embossed letterhead looks important.
“Fathoms Deep Collider Project.”
He opens.
"Tsunami Alert - Testing to begin on September 23rd"

He looks over at turtle,
up at sculpture,
out to sea,
"3 months---not much time."

The artist lies beside the turtle.
The seagull comes alongside, folding it wings beneath.
Looming over this collective presence,
the lightning bolt catches a break-through beam of sunlight,
its blinding reflection encasing the three.

Nothing moves.

The turtle finally adjusts itself.

The Seagull blinks.

Pocketing the letter, the artist smiles.
The sun’s protection, time’s subtle movement,
mirrors another small piece of life…
about to change.

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 26, 2015
A cool scientific piece of fiction. Methinks the island will suffer a much slower and insidious tsunami. Read a report yesterday that the world's oceans have risen four inches in recent years. That trend is likely to accelerate in the all too near, future.

I spotted a couple of typos, unnatural for you. But then, from the intensity of this piece, I can see that you worked very passionately and hard on it and probably didn't have time to go over it one last time before you posted it… Like I often do.

Ron


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