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Quiet Opulence

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To homogenize something is to change its parts so they are the same or similar, reminding us for every rise, there may well be a fall. (Image by behance)

Friday, March 20, 2015


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Quiet Opulence
by Odin Roark

The race to the top,
acquiring the approval of everyone,
forever sweating on the StairMaster of ambition,
obsessing on stuff as proof of one’s arrived,
unconsciously becoming but an animated dollar sign,
eventually becoming a member of society’s homogenized success.

Dripping stress’s toxins from every pore and orifice,
glory,
adulation,
envy,
and off-shore accounts,
echo the all-convincing “life doesn’t get any better than this,”
unless…

For a few,
experiencing the rarefied anomaly of becoming
one who makes his or her own finish line,
achieves the approval of few,
remains forever impervious
to the collective’s seduction,
and discovers getting up early enough to see the sunrise
and staying conscious enough to enjoy the sunset,
is what separates rewards from payoffs.

In such a place of the mind,
there resides a different kind of island offshore,
the inner-one where sounds are quiet,
cacophonous clamor is distant,
ebb and tide remain private,
where to be his or her own person is the given,
a distinction needing no board approval,
no golden parachute to break the fall
as fixed-ropes of delusion continually erode.

Discovering one’s quiet opulence,
the solo indulgence never needing forgiveness.
 


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Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
wow..great writing...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
It is said (by Mr. Anonymous)that "the wealthiest person is not the one who has the most, but the one who needs the least." You have just described that person with at least equal insight. I envy all three of you.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
I wonder what it would be like with the stress of reaching the financial "top" and all the attendant pressure to "do this or do that," that extreme wealth entails. I much prefer the second idea proffered in your poem. Reaching contentment and self-fulfillment. I'd like to think that I'll reach that place very soon and let fame and fortune slide off like the slippery snakes they can be.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
An enviable place you've discovered, and elegantly described. Alibaba and Solomon would be envious.


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