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Wordsmith's Longterm Diet

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We are all with voracious appetite, but some cultivate different tastes to satiate life’s fullness. (Image by Rougeau)

Thursday, June 4, 2015


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Wordsmith's Long-Term Diet
by Odin Roark

The thirst hour,
where dark caramel movement
swirls its spell among icy shards,
as today and yesterday's memories
wait to cut loose their syllabic flotsam,
ink's endless search
for shoreline discovery.

Just as Time knows so well opportunity,
so too imagination refuses confinement,
remembering primitive grunts,
vernacular's ancient primate sounds
made legible by centuries' evolving accent,
rhythm,
pitch,
tempo.

Such teasing
of creation's palate
only ups the appetite
for lexiconic feasting.

Servings beg entrance…

Symbols simmer themselves into words,
offer snacks for tweets,
sumptuous main courses for tomes,
desserts for savory stories short,
aperitifs for thoughtful poetic musings.

Satiated for now…

After dinner dozing
shrouds tomorrow’s pressure,
as junk food language awaits another chance
to taunt a wordsmith’s discipline.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 5, 2015
I recall a psychological study about satisfaction. I don't remember the author/psychologist/researcher, but the gist of the study was that a paycheck was not satisfying because it was like lunch. Once one has eaten, it is usually only a few hours later when hunger returns, the eater or paycheck receiver/raise receiver is never really satisfied.

So it is with compulsive wordsmithing. You and I are both trapped in the idea that we must write something every day and feel very hungry when we aren't satisfied with copious word output. It is strange, but when I find that I'm really passionately involved in writing a novel or short story, I lose track of time, don't ever seem to be thirsty or hungry, and can generally write on well past any deadline that I would set for myself.

In that regard, your poem today is very telling for most of us writers.

Ron

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 4, 2015
I love the way the sounds become textures ...and the idea of "junk food language" and "Symbols simmering" are such poignant images for the mind to digest that I can almost taste them.


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