Rainforests Weep
by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com
Rainforests once covered 14% of the earth’s land surface; now they cover a mere 6% and experts estimate that the last remaining rainforests could be consumed in less than 40 years. The Amazon Rainforest has been described as the "Lungs of our Planet" because it provides the essential environmental world service of continuously recycling carbon dioxide into oxygen. More than 20 percent of the world oxygen is produced in the Amazon Rainforest. More than half of the world's estimated 10 million species of plants, animals and insects live in the tropical rainforests. One-fifth of the world's fresh water is in the Amazon Basin.
Monday, February 8, 2016
Rainforests Weep
by Odin Roark
You know not our language.
You speak not with words.
How innate your wisdom.
How unlearned our lessons.
How graceful your stay.
How greedy our entrance.
What we want, we take.
What you need, you seed.
How large your footprint.
How lightly you tread.
How dense your growth.
How shortsighted our harvest.
How respectful your heritage.
How arrogant our legacy.
For the conscious, you’ll be missed,
a planet’s waning breath willing.
Even as time runs short…
Nature will continue to thrive on love,
humanity profit on deception,
and greed mock reality with more lies;
“You can’t see the forest for the trees.”
Look again.
The trees are disappearing.
Always,
Deborah
Hug
Kathy
Michael D.
This by way of prelude to let you know that I know and appreciate the rain forests and have a particular love for them. That said, I just loved your poem. Firstly, again I repeat, I like the way you play with grammar together with the sense of repetition in order to make an impact. That works very well in this poem. Also, the two liners are perfect for the subject matter and meaningful as well. That's the form. Otherwise, content-wise, you touch upon the key points in a firm but touching manner that is most impressive. This poem works very well, Odin, and strikes right to the core. I love it. Well done.
John