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Fast Lane Gridlock

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Ever notice how life’s innumerable fast lanes are becoming grid locked? (Image by dailydesigninspiration.com)

Saturday, March 5, 2016


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Fast Lane Gridlock
By Odin Roark

Might the tortoise one day soon pass the hare?

Whether speeding to the off-ramp of frenetic social media,
lounging through the sound bite informational middle lane,
coining today’s trendy-word weaving in and out,
pausing as a law abiding tweeter on the shoulder,
or the voracious competitor
vying for a peddle-to-the-metal on-ramp inclusion,
the masses thrusting mind and body forward into the....

Mess.

So goes the compulsion
to be ahead,
to be the one,
to be the leader.

Of what?

A running-in-place parking lot of your own making?

Recall when…

So simple the decisions,
adolescent verve breaching the parental bond,
teenville’s reckless nirvana,
young adult risks guaranteeing success,
or true adulthood as a concession?

Such anticipation delivered blurred lines,
not unlike today’s fast lane.

Back then…

How willingly one’s canvases stretched,
inviting a wash of honest foundation,
beckoning a clear eyed brush-stroke of truth
extending one’s passionate pigments rich,
arcing dripping tendrils of mind's Pollock-like synapses
to splash across learning's crosshatched safety net,
at last revealing not colors by numbers,
opting instead for a rogue's palette,
a liquefied Philip Glass expedition
traversing creation's crescendos,
once unconquerable high-note-peaks,
endless deserts of quiet,
fathomless oceans of evolution
evaporating into the infinity of nothing,
and everything.

Today…

To levitate the darkness,
accept those of blind impetus,
invites time's universe of unanswerable questions
where raised textures of wisdom’s essence
longevity’s canvas of sensorial pleasure,
promises existence immeasurable,
where dust’s vibration survives,
even after mortality’s demise.

With expectancy offering so many on ramps…

Might the task really be
to enjoy the comfort of fulfillment,
where to create thought slowly,
carefully nurture one's journey
seeing, hearing, feeling the surroundings,
is to stave off acquiescence into
man’s fast lane stalemate…

Such is an intriguing place to be.

Just ask the tortoise of your mind
who long ago determined
time might go fast,
our hare not withstanding,
but passage wasn’t designed for gridlock.





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Reviewed on March 6, 2016
as one clever guy said many centuries ago, 'act where there is no action and work effortlessly to achieve effect and taste the tasteless to develop a taste' to escape gridlocks. In a word, march without marching and the dilemma of tortoise and hare vanishes itself. As another clever guy said, 'much ado about nothing' all these endeavours to wrench one's very soul ;)) Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 6, 2016
I've always enjoyed going fast, pedal-to-the-metal, while not particularly trying to beat someone there, my natural competitive nature liked going fast, like the time I completed a final exam in one half hour of the two-hour period and decided to wait for others to finish. I had to wait another half hour for my twin brother to come out, the second one to finish. We were always competitors. I was on the fast track in life until my noticeable disability got in the way.



Today, like your poem, I see overchoice and future shock setting in with people racing down many paths at the same time trying to do too much with their lives through multitasking, spinning their wheels, and gridlocked through poor decisions.



I've always taken the time, like an ancient hunter and gatherer with water, fire, a good day, and a full belly, to take time out a few times every day to just stop, not think of anything in particular, and observe the natural world around to let the mind unwind.



Ron

Reviewed by Dadfire
Reviewed on March 6, 2016
This may be an odd take from your work but it reminds me of the fact that people are polarized into lockstep groups in just about every belief system. Once you admit anything in common in one area with one group, it is like you can't believe in something the other group platforms.
So many people just don't think for themselves anymore and you end up with extremism with only two diametrically opposed options, one never accepting anything of the other and thus gridlock.
What I want to do is get in my 4-wheeler and go offroad and takes some bumps as they come along, so much more fun!!!
Dan

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 5, 2016
"A rogue's palatte" indeed from the pen of this poet. What imagery, what flair. Sounds like you are on an off-ramp of your own, a place I would like to find. Let me accompany you away from the "stalemate" so I can also "carefully nurture one's (my) journey." I always knew I was a tortoise; it's getting there that I am still trying to do.

John

Reviewed by J. Quantaman
Reviewed on March 5, 2016
Once again, Odin, thanks for so many lovely images:
"canvass stretched" ... "tortoise of your mind" ... "running-in-place-parking lot"

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 5, 2016
You are so right. Every avenue of life is gridlocked. Survival means to jam your nose into the rear end of whoever is in front of you and go with the flow to zombieville, but with a retirement check awaiting at the end of the line. If you are clever and have learned something about the rat race, perhaps you can survive like one of our fellow writers now living on a river island in Cambodia with a small but adequate income and with a wife and child who love him. He would not change a thing. He's one in a million--as a writer, a wise man, and as a man who knows his strengths and his weaknesses.


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