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Traveling

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There is an art to walking with perhaps only an audience of concrete to appreciate it. (Image by Lisa Purda)

Sunday, March 20, 2016


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Traveling
by Odin Roark

In New York,
if sidewalks could express…

Our bipedal locomotion,
with its rhythmic motion of walking,
undeniable perfection of swinging limbs,
gifted clockwork symmetry,
a mechanical coincidence of events seemingly related
probably makes proud the concrete stage,
arousing silent applause and cheers for our
collective balance of instinctive choreography.

All the while…

The human stride remains uncomplicated,
its dazzling operation requiring little conscious thought,
as our feet carry out our involuntary wishes,
our bodies on auto-pilot lurching forward
allowing our voluntary minds atop the flesh enhanced machine
to manage the synchronicity of breath, pulse, pores,
and the multitude of inner-locking gears for each successful step
while we dream and plan experiences for the myriad destinations
of our trek.

What magic this.

All because of natural selection from barren tundra,
to jungles and swamp,
to mountainous migration,
to concrete and steel metropolises
housing millions of our kind.

How comforting…

Knowing each step forward
is an innate leap of faith,
our unconscious assumption
that we won’t tumble, topple,
or land improperly,
all the while advancing each step extravagantly,
assuredly, and with no less audaciousness
than history’s great pyramids,
and the conquering of Everest.

And yet…

The art of walking in most cities, including New York,
like the increasing taking-for-granted of other inborn sentience,
we are succumbing to paved highways and all other sorts
of fast lane living.

It makes one wonder…

If sidewalks could express,
would they be mourning the disappearance
of our shoe leather rhythms,
the echoes of progress,
achievement’s cadence?


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Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on April 21, 2016
Walking for me clears my mind and gives me a sense of renewal

hug
Kathy

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on March 21, 2016
Walking set to poetry. What an idea! From normalcy to novelty to wonder to... magic? Sensational.

Reviewed on March 21, 2016
good walking leaves no track behind; good speaking leaves no skipping to be picked at. . . here, we've got both regarding NYC. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 21, 2016
There is nothing more enhancing than a walk. With all of our senses alive capturing even gravity and position as we navigate the natural landscape, whether it be the concrete and steps of the city or the deep brush, hilly terrain, muddy trail or soft sand of nature. A 360 degree kaleidoscope of sight and sound and smell.

Not only in airports, but futurists have described moving sidewalks that would carry pedestrians throughout cities faster than cars using lanes with step off capability to slower tracks.

As one who has experience the sudden loss of full walking ability, followed by 30 years of gradual degradation leading to countless trips and falls brought on by lack of body brain coordination, your poem speaks to the wonderful magic of walking that I have now lost forever, at least, that is, until cured (?).

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 21, 2016
To answer your question: Yes, sidewalks would mourn "the disappearance of our shoe leather rhythms", most definitely. That is why I walk as much as possible, to keep them happy, particularly when I am in New York. John


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