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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Identity in a complex society is becoming more difficult for many, given the temporary sense of what is real at the moment so often revealing itself as a fraudulent effort by someone’s or institutional entity’s means of keeping one powerless. (Image by Petri Damsten)

Saturday, August 20, 2016


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Becoming
by Odin Roark

How many become the words they read,
the chapter and verse of another’s perception,
the plot and characters forged from another’s experience?

How clever,
this trickery we play with our brains,
this escape we readily subscribe to,
this acquired destiny of a story,
but not our own.

Yet…

For many,
the world of books
becomes their primary resource for understanding,
be it one’s own entrapment in fantasy,
or one’s gleaning an epiphany about their personal being.
Such is revealing time spent.

But…

What a travesty we feel
when witnessing the often butchered facsimile of a cherished book,
falling into the abyss of profiteering fostered by cinema and television.

For readers,
the closing of our eyes,
the spreading of our arms,
courageously walking the plank of daring discovery,
provides a special contentment with ourselves,
with knowing a truth,
the book’s integrity,
the reader’s empowerment,
the power of imagination revealing itself as a gift.

For the fortunate who find reading a privilege…

Such renders realize multiple choices:
Are we becoming who we are,
who we choose not to be,
or who we thoughtfully aspire to echo to others? 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 21, 2016
You're right about the reader's imagination. When one reads a book, the mind fills in the scenes and connects the various characters and action in a way that is entirely the reader's own. That's why one critic would say the book is great while another would say it is trash.

I have found that many of the classics have been turned into farces by moneygrubbing moviemakers with the same formula, mostly shock and violence to create a movie world of constant sequels that get worse as they exaggerate more and more what the original author intended. Television is the same; making sure that at the end of every sequence there is some suspense to get the viewer to come back and keep the ratings up. Lately, however, I've noticed that some dramas on television are getting quite good. However, they do tend to have, “another season,” that starts to deteriorate. Fargo, the TV series, so far, goes against that trend.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 20, 2016
Your poem is a fascinating, exploratory expression of what it means to search, look for, and find one's personal identity. It really is a critical question, partly because so many people are completely out of touch with their own identity. They believe; they disbelieve. They search; but they do not find. They are bigoted and argumentative, and therefore find nothing beyond themselves and their own "identity" such that it is. It is hard to "echo others" when you cannot echo yourself. Thought-provoking write. John

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 20, 2016
Indeed... It is difficult to live in a fish bowl and realize it. It is almost impossible, from within a controlled environment, to notice your imprisonment; even the very medium in which you exist acts on and controls your perceptions. Like the view from inside a fish bowl, the view to the outside is distorted enough to be misunderstood. Only when you are elevated from the effects that surround you can you see what is truly taking place. You need an objective, an informed perspective that is not bound by your own polluted misunderstanding.
Certain books do that for me. And they do so quite well. Certain authors have illuminated the direction I've walked in my entire life. But still, in a vaster concentric, I realize that the authors/originators of those books/insights are only one echo of a much greater reality that none of us can truly (or fully) understand presently. Such is the role some of us play as authors and poets. Enjoyed this. Clearly and univocally presented. Peace to you...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on August 20, 2016
I often marvel at the insights gleaned from a well-written poem or from the intricate meanderings that a skilled writer or narrator brings to a thoughtful dialogue about a difficult subject. When they are wrapped in honesty and clarity they become compelling. They help to shape my own convictions. Thanks for the reminders.


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