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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

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Whitecap Spirit

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are everyday people and some philosophers suggesting our existence is all an illusion. Others think many people live in an unrealized reality of their own denial

Friday, September 30, 2016


Poem Artwork
Whitecap Spirit
by Odin Roark

Life's experience,
like calm's paradox, chaos,
never rests,
nurturing unpredictability,
reality’s innate genetic domain.

Even so…

Practice the wave we must.
Surf it, we try,
Man’s balance ever shredding the curl
into endless marbled breakers.

"Take your best shot,"
personification infused with risk-essential choices.

Some smile,
other’s thump their chests
unaware the unknown invites challenge.

And still others…

Understand the history before us
is the perpetuity of happenstance,
repeating ancient mistakes,
undulating with courageous failure,
even though wisdom's veritable ocean of waves,
wavelets and gentle ripples
witness sadness,
awaiting man’s timeless message
to become a lesson learned.

How easy to remains unaware.

So many eyes blinded
by learning’s stinging sensations of spray,
causing some to turn their mortality the other way,
struggling personas identifying with gravity
constricting freedom's imagination to leap,
to ride unpredictable breakers,
and like a bloated sow's intestine,
stuffed of indigestion's acid burn and gases,
many continue masticating their ignorance,
thinking all one’s destructive tsunamis can be mastered.

Unrealistic dreams roil and shift like tectonic plates
building momentum until releasing explosive pressures.

Such events become an experience
providing death's final wavecap,
dragging the unfortunate into its undertow,
drowning forever partnerships with other persons
oblivious of nature's always available perfection.

So why…

Certain persons choose madness
of uncreative kind,
willing to tumble beneath the current
daring the air above them to disappear.

Eventually…

Such beings become mere flotsam of spirit,
molecular matter drifting to shore,
still in denial of erosion's rightness,
the cosmic endless rebirthing of existence.

For the fortunate…

Quiet tides gently massage mankind,
reminding all of history's attrition as necessary,
forever sliding effortlessly back to the deep,
cradling exhausted effort as only nature knows how.

Far out to sea, moonlight edges antiquity's raised arms,
knowing its homage is aware of time's compassion
and its whitecap spirit.


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 1, 2016

as always, well said, inspirational read


Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 30, 2016
The poem jump from verse to exotic verse in a cornucopia of precision and insight. Yet another poem that peels back the landscape and lays it bare for the reader to explore. John

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 30, 2016
This is quite a mélange of metaphors woven together into a tapestry of life as seen through the eyes of a poet who is at home on land, sea, or air with nothing but an abundance of talent to guide him, the likes of which this reader has not found in any other. Anything less misses the point. Anything more is too intrusive. Bravo!


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