AuthorsDen.com  Join | Login 

 
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Authors | Books | Audiobooks | eBooks | Signed Bookstore | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors:  D. Enise, iJoy Pedersen, iFERIAL Haque, iTerry Vinson, iWilliam Martell, iFrank Ryan, iR.E.E.S Blogs Linda Smith, Publisher, iJ and C Wordsmiths, iGwendolyn Thomas Gath, iEmmanuel Laroche, i

  Home > Poetry > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Odin odin@aflx.com

 Follow Me  

· 4,268 titles
· 12,669 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: Jul, 2008

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Read Reviews



Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


Articles
· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

         More poetry...

Odin odin@aflx.com, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

Books by
Odin odin@aflx.com











See all Books
by Odin odin@aflx.com


   
  Share   Print   Save   

Stones So Quiet

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Personifying the language of the unspoken conjures up reality we can only imagine.

Friday, October 14, 2016


Poem Artwork
Stones So Quiet
by Odin Roark

The confinement nothing wishes to escape.

Such might be the life
inside a stone.

For where can ancestral honesty
be better gleaned
than from ocean’s silt
and glacial drift,
this mix of evolution’s
fire and plant,
flesh and bone,
this alchemy,
once magic,
now the stone.

Polished over time,
it rolls,
abuts winds,
sinks slowly
from sea upon sea,
carrying further
this history of life’s time
tumbled from nature’s infant hand
to yet the next
ebb and tide,
shore to shore.

How intimate it must be,
these inner walls of the stone
where once cold of ice
relinquished its drifting sand
beneath maplandia’s anvil,
lending sparks of light within,
impregnating hieroglyphs of personal history,
traveling solo,
traveling lonely,
traveling as a whisper,
these stones so quiet.


Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on October 15, 2016
O the songs they could sing us ... thanks for the reminder and the key.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 15, 2016
Fine imagery supporting your premise. A clear perception into a multi-faceted subject. I relate. My wife and I have two glass jars filled with river stones of various sizes and colors on the bookshelves. The metaphors and sayings (about stones) abound in every culture. Here's a few that come to mind you might relate to: Don't carry your mistakes and failures around with you. Instead, place them under your feet and use them as stepping stones... A rolling stone gathers no moss but it gains a certain polish... Today you can decide that your past can either be your stumbling block or your stepping stone. Many of these sayings offer a palpable wisdom that causes the reader to cerebrate as does your write. Enjoyed this. Peace...

Reviewed on October 15, 2016
in the ancient Asian east, a stone brought the image of an obstacle and barrier. . . might be, for some people, not for you. Lots thanks for completing this piece. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 14, 2016
Indeed. Almost any stone predates and postdates us by a hundred million years. And each carries its own record of what was, what is, and what will be. It does quiet the mind to contemplate the life of a stone and our destructive pathway close by.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 14, 2016
Love your phrasing "This history of life's time", "tumbled from nature's infant hand." This poem is astounding and reaches deep, a brilliant idea expertly explored. John


New Poetry by Odin odin@aflx.com
hhh