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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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Rooms

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

We live our lives in enclosures, some imagined, some undeniably real.

Wednesday, November 2, 2016


Poem Artwork
Rooms
by Odin Roark

How prescient that first room,
the one where under the bed
proved private the light,
where flashlight and toy soldier
became all that was needed.

Came

The room with desk,
where locked door
gave entrance to video games,
while parents assumed study.

Came

The SATs room,
Where curtains were drawn.
No boom box,
where silence begged,
knowing only study focus needed.

Came

The dorm room,
with beer-can-crushing-to-the-head roommate,
making for final exam hell,
where stolen passions
with sorority queen fantasy
made eating
a non sequitur.

Came

The office walls,
the room for fortune
made eventually corrupt
with drawn curtains of another kind.

Came

The marriage bed-room,
that place where all became prescient again,
where an impregnation would validate a wife’s existence,
while with mandatory acceptance
a husband’s duty would be carried out.

Came…

Came…

The rooms never stop.
Some…
Their final architecture,
becomes nursing-home green.
some of palm-frond-shack freedom.
Still others…
a Soho 3-story condo isolation.

Rooms

Curiously unknown until they are.

Forever one’s personal wall-measure.
Imagination struggles against
the capsule,
the coffin,
and finally…
destiny’s ever-conscious decision.  


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 3, 2016
Another poem of life passages. This time highlighting the rooms we occupy throughout life.

My biggest concern is a room without a window to the outside world. Being confined to a room like that would wear away at my sensibilities. Unless, of course, I had a big screen television with a window on many worlds at the touch of a few buttons.

Ron

Reviewed on November 3, 2016
there is no place like home space because we fill our rooms up with our souls -- the energy which is preserved to make us stronger in needs. . . though to do the same thing with any other room takes time, still it's a good method to work with space in a positive way, such as playing good music, singing and dancing on high ;)) Cheers, alex

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 2, 2016
If only the occupier had a little more choice about the degree of pleasure or pain that gets meted out in each room...

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 2, 2016
Great idea well executed. The many rooms that we have known presents a fascinating topic in nostalgia. John


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