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The Sweater

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Lest we forget, it’s often the simple objects and memories that help keep the dying alive

Sunday, November 27, 2016


Poem Artwork
The Sweater
by Odin Roark


The aged veteran sits idly
Upon rocker and barren porch,
Remembering.

Unlike a space suit,
Its every fiber fit
By rigid standard.

Unlike the starched khaki shirt,
Its extremities forged firm as armor,
Its pleats kept at attention.

Unlike the dress blues,
Symbolic of authority and command,
Unyielding in its façade of glory.

The sweater,
Like love,
Molds to behavior,
Forever willing to comfort the flesh
And bring warmth to the heart.

As passion's woven threads
Assimilate the wearer's hardships,
Fear of frayed ends disappear,
Accepting entwined living
Is not without accident and wear.

Affection asks little in return,
Needing only to be spared
The folding into a drawer
Of forgotten memories.

Given care,
The patience of love
Remains forever dedicated,
Embracing any and all it touches.

And like the tattered loyal sweater,
Judges not the body,
But dutifully complies,
Abiding the ever shrinking collapse
Of life fully lived.

The veteran rocks slowly to sleep.

His sweater held close.


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on November 28, 2016

lovely read, as one who knits sweaters this one has special warmth for me

the graphic is lovely, hand knit cables gorgeous!

well done


Reviewed on November 28, 2016
This really touched me deeply as the elderly lady for whom I am Caregiver has a sweater she refuses to change. Her son has bought her beautiful warm sweaters but she won't wear them. She prefers her old lavender colored, frayed sweater and she is beautiful in it.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 28, 2016
A brilliant composition, stunning in its impact.
More proof of my personal belief that beauty is one part elegance and one part simplicity.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 28, 2016
Ah . . . A very sensitive piece of poetical wordplay . . . I agree that a sweater is almost a necessary bit of comfort, and not only to "help keep the dying alive."

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 27, 2016
An appropriate image woven into a mysterious set of emotions. Brilliant. John


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