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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· War and Peace

· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Death On Hold

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Loneliness is a voice sent into the canyons of mind, but often never echoing back. (Image by Deviant art)

Tuesday, December 27, 2016


Poem Artwork
Death on Hold
by Odin Roark
Once
the what of lonely was asked
“why does this heart feels tired,
worn out,
fatigued?”

“Are flowers
no longer to open their petals,
skies remaining gray and void of love's colors?”

The what of lonely invoked the dialectic with
“Is this loneliness but the result of passion unanswered
regrets unheard
contriteness unaccepted
weeping without acceptance of self?”

With a gentle touch...

“Could lonely be more than a word of sadness?
Might it be but death on hold?”

The questioning gathered its shadows and disappeared,
leaving behind high above, a robin's egg
moving precariously
beneath a mother
peering intently
as a dawning sky
emerged.


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Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 28, 2016

powerful, poignant read

well said

never stop writing !!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 27, 2016
"Might it be but death on hold?" I don't think so, and neither does the poet. John

Reviewed on December 27, 2016
Death, rebirth........cycles all start from the second a living entity emerges from the mother host. Beautifully written!

Love ya!

Jane


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