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Eyes Shut

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How sometimes the shear act of closing one’s eyes gives light to the most hidden truth. (Image by Richard Hayward)

Wednesday, January 25, 2017


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Eyes Shut
by Odin Roark

There is one darkness
visible to all.
and still another,
eyes shut darkness
revealing something
more than nocturnal escape.

Such a person may not sleep,
yet sees himself by the sound
of fluttering eyelids,
the peace, of need,
admitting his nervousness,
the subtle scratching of his pencil,
knowing there are those without writing instrument.

This is the rasping of escape,
the discontent
needing outlet,
the timeless percussion of discovery,
and the persistent crumbling of paper
not yet fit to share.

Such visionary truth is daunted
only by the murderous century being lived out. 


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Reviewed on January 26, 2017
This reminds me of times that I have dreams that wake me up. I'll close my eyes trying to fall asleep but need to write, half asleep, about what I was dreaming. Crumbling paper??? Oh, yeah!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 26, 2017
I do admit to closing my eyes more while not asleep because it does allow me to see with an inner eye. Strangely, the progress of the last century enabled me to be able to not hold a pencil in my hand for the last 50 years… Yet I can still scribble with words like these.

While your vision is quite good, I don't think this century will be anywhere near as murderous as the last.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 25, 2017
A fine insight. We carries the darkness within us and rather than being fearsome, it can be a form of escape. All you have to do it "close your eyes". John


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