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Discoverying Twirly Things

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Remembering the Foss balance and motion kits in school, for the fortunate the lessons continue to transcend the obvious. (Image by kinwicked)

Friday, May 19, 2017


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Discovering Twirly Things

Loneliness,
the ever-aware sadness buried
did stumble about untouched,
awaiting enigma’s shadow
to rise into the light.

Came that special day,
the young boy made simple discovery.
did awaken curled atop summer grass.
So unadorned came the moment,
while laying upon his back,
a mere release of breath
sent dandelion umbrellas afloat,
their landing a magical message upon his chest…

“Awaken your heart,”
did they whisper,
“For challenge awaits
beyond youthful innocence.”

So many years trailed behind
among trampled grasses of trial and error,
where memory’s favorite messenger,
this weed of delicate flight
remained his companion of conscience,
childhood’s subliminal gift.

How precious was discovery,
introduced once as a gently landing twirly thing,
quietly delivering an inexplicable lesson of love,
life's protection for vulnerable tenderness.


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 20, 2017
Exploring the wonders of nature firsthand at ground level. How many times I blew the fluff of a dandelion and didn't observe the miraculous power of those wispy umbrellas take the seed far in the wind. My first discovery of twirling things were the blades of a helicopter. Hence, you became a poet and I became an engineer.

Ron

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 20, 2017
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 19, 2017
There is a lilting, lovely grace to this poem, emphasized by the sight of the escaping dandelion umbrellas. How precious discovery indeed, may it ever continue to reveal itself. John

Reviewed on May 19, 2017
Funny how a plant can be a "companion of conscience,

childhood's subliminal gift."



Those two lines tell us so much about ourselves. Beautiful!!! I connect with the smell of clover.



Love ya!



Jane


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