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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

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· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

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· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Journey

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For many, age is a dreaded reality. For others it represents completion. (Image by Tony Luciani)

Saturday, June 10, 2017


Poem Artwork
Journey

Our surface etchings,
how quiet the disfiguring moves,
skin's tenacity ever protective,
even as tissue of smiles eventually
becomes but canyon topography of time past.

Leisurely proceeds savage healing beneath,
bombarded with nature's unexpected.
Aging platelets shift,
taking their time,
knowing we wait,
uplifting sorrows once buried,
making molten the flow
once contained and hardened.

Whether by deed
word,
or thought,
wounds start open,
their scarring knowing patience,
art rendered of the dreaded kind.

And then a day finally arrives.

Scars begin to shrivel.
Age becomes its own embrace,
the earned chameleon friendship,
a cycle complete,
the rebirth of crying,
the wrinkled mature baby
awaiting protection.

However…

This time,
with the long sleep
poised at the threshold,
where awakening
remains unnecessary,
smile muscles mix with sadness.

A completed resonance becomes
the all of one. 


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Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on June 11, 2017
Good poem. I can't really say much else because at 68 I still feel I will go on forever and find life gets more interesting with each year that passes.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 11, 2017
An off repeated theme here with many aging poets. There is a remarkable similarity between the newborn and about to leave in terms of dependence. We reach that point at both ends of our lifespan unless we are mercifully cut short while still healthy and highly functioning. Leaving early or leaving late can be quite painful, depending upon the circumstances.

You have painted the pictures of infant dependence and aging dependence very well.

Ron

Reviewed on June 10, 2017
You have taken us through a very real journey. The imagery along the dot to dot idea comes through loud and clear. 'Enjoyed!

Love ya!

Jane


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