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Sand's Many Footprints

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A public beach offers contrasts that can make us truly think what is real, and what is make-believe. (Image by Barque d’images)

Sunday, July 16, 2017


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Sand’s Many Footprints

What happened to simple seashores?

Consider…
the long stretch of beach,
a mix of coconut aromas of sunscreen,
mossy and salty tartness of the dock,
sail boat and dingy harbor dancing with the tide,
parents wrestling squealing kids on the sand,
packs of bikers ringing their bells in code,
seagulls squawking over sunbather’s throwaways,
swings squeaking from the nearby playground,
dogs barking for a Frisbee on the grass near the bandstand.

Escapees make their way to the yacht club,
the bike shop,
the trendiest bar,
while sun worshipers lap their ice cream cones,
slurp iced coffees.

Summer hubbub.

A pause to check the senses,
one stops to think.

Upon reaching a certain age,
do the eyes, ears, smell, taste and touch
perceive such a big swath of open beach
as happiness abounding,
or merely life chasing time backwards?


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Reviewed on July 19, 2017
Because I was once part of the "happiness abounding," I still like to walk the shore, marveling at toys children show to me or their sand castles, and collecting beach glass. Your poem had me "chasing time backwards?"!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 17, 2017
No one can describe summer hubbub like you do, Odin, full of specificity and fine detail. An interesting question in the end that I am inclined to answer in the negative. John

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on July 17, 2017
It must be an age thing because I have the same inverted sense of time on such occasions. This is very perceptive, as usual. And so descriptive.

Reviewed by Eva Pasco
Reviewed on July 17, 2017
I always take the beach on its own terms when it is void of people and dogs. Barring the remnants of footprints, you're left with the beach's natural elements. It's then up to us to define how we feel at a certain age at that moment, reeling in everything our senses perceive.


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