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Everyone's Glass Darkly

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

How many of us fantasize that we are all a message in a bottle trying to find purchase.. (Image by wonderfulphoto)

Wednesday, October 18, 2017


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Everyone’s Glass Darkly

The moment I was screwed shut
the air a pleasant carbonate
outside flotilla
began its escort
from port to sea,
sea to shore,
and back again,
always the tides,
spent surprises
from Coney Island loop the loop
to lazy lapping over shell laden beach,
always my view untethered.

Open.

Free.

So easy to remember.

He/She knew not the course,
this voyage of hopeful message.

Her/his pencil deft upon my recycled skin
the pressure was kind,
the "love Terra"gentle,
the adoption plea desperate.

It's cold at night.
Balmy within by day.
Ocean visitors gaze upon me,
their gelatus eyes in wonder of
who goes there,
this scribed symbol within.

Mute as I am,
they seem to understand,
giving me wave of fin,
blink of eye,
even escort at times.

Of late however,
my message begs risk.
Oil and dredge smears cross my lens,
my transparency clouds.

Yet further the tide
carries my message
into the “Dead Zone’s” murky waters
where greed-colored life
floats its collateral damage aimlessly about.

Innocent beaks but grave posts of greed.
Once life filled wings,
but part of the gathering weight
now becoming mere anchors into darkness.

It's night time

All the time

Discarded garbage my obstacle.

All the while,
a planet loses trust.

A bottled message becomes garbage- locked.

The world’s children sit at the shore

Closed.

Imprisoned.

My journey
floats not for now.

Perhaps another sunrise
will find its way through
the glass darkly of another kind.

Perhaps.     


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Reviewed on October 19, 2017
A pure message ending up in the trash rather resembles the message some of us are trying to send sadly ending up in a wastebasket somewhere in D.C..

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 19, 2017
There is a powerful message in your message bottle floating not so free.

When once a bottle with a message could be cast upon the sea and arrive years later on a distant beach to be read and cherished.

Now the entire sea is like that bottle. The message is outside the bottle and everywhere floating. Visiting any beach that isn't groomed almost daily and you will find it littered with messages that are foul, dirty, and sometimes, deadly. Giving us a strong sense of the coming death of the planet.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on October 19, 2017
fine imagery and lines to keep the reader reading

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on October 19, 2017
enticing, eye opening read. we have each other. and yes perhaps another sunrise brings forth, more and more people awakening.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 19, 2017
Mysterious. The way your imagery hits my senses, for some reason, reminded me of Herman Hesse' novel Steppenwolf and Harry Haller's metaphorical 'magic theater' where he deals with the ethereal phantasmal fantasies in his mind. Peace... r


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