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Corregated Eyes 2017

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Another year...another cycle. This morning's headlines portend once more how habitual the warring instinct is, and how quickly both domestic and foreign interests can be engulfed in its sadness. (Image by Tom Thumb).

Sunday, October 22, 2017


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Corrugated Eyes 2017

Where once a landscape bore fruit of the earth,
the mind,
one's heart,
now drifts only the threat of apocalyptic smoke
winding through the future’s early morning mist.

How soon…

Will desperation continue to shiver and cry to afford the sun
once felt as life’s friend,
now only valued as shadows of panic
through tiny windows cut askew
in boxes of survival.

Yes…

Box people do exist.

Below high-rise strongholds,
undulating waves of heat
imprison the downtrodden,
their street savvy drowning in a sea of sweat,
watching hope continue to drip into flotation
toward but another whirlpool tomorrow.

How indifferent power treats its charge,
once equal by nature,
now quashed beneath control’s sole and heel,
once foils of goodness and protection,
now but dust motes of the past
becoming more distant.

It is not far off,
this once fantasized science fiction becoming real.

For dung beetles
must eat,
and carcasses must smoke,
lest the calamity of man
be seen as avoidable.

Yet…

Certain dreams continue
inside a single cell survival,
where boxes provide but scant protection for
their corrugated eyes.


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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 26, 2017
It never stops affecting me to see how many people fall so far down the well. It's a daily part of life where we live. A good use of imagery in this. Peace to you... r

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 23, 2017
Thank goodness for corrugated cardboard. Cardboard's insulating properties have saved many a life. But it's one hell of a house to live in and rain turns it into a soggy mess losing all those magic properties.

Your poem conjures up all the apocalyptic movies (I haven't read the novels) that show the path to the future in not a very bright way. We seem to be in a mad hurry to reach dystopia by disenfranchising so many and building towers to mammon while on the outskirts are the growing slums of discontent.

Fortunately, world statistics show steady progress towards a fairer and healthier world for all. Which will it be? Let us hope that poems like yours are a well heeded warning.

Ron

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on October 23, 2017
A very informative poem Odin. We have a ministry who tends to the needs of so-called box people. These folks come from all walks of life. Some were wealthy and some used to have huge family ties. Sadly, most have become addicted to powerful drugs and alcohol. It seems no one in society is totally exempt these days. If we go to the wrong party we can get hooked on stuff that is so very addictive by just trying something with a friend. Then there are over the counter drugs that can be very harmful and addictive as well. We need to pray for wisdom to stay far away from this life of hell. Then we need to find solutions to help the addicted as well. Not an easy task but it's a challenge that must be dealt with today. Amen!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 22, 2017
I have seen them many times on the streets of New York filling my heart with sorrow. You have brought them to life.

Reviewed on October 22, 2017
Yes, "Certain dreams continue". No one can take our dreams away as we do what we must do to survive. 'Love this!

Love ya!

Jane


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