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Awareness Gasping

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Everyday events convolute the resolve of even the most determined to experience the essence of what it’s actually like to be an intrinsic part of awareness. (Image by Pinterest)

Tuesday, December 5, 2017


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Awareness Gasping

How gentle,
Awakening to breath,
Breathing into awareness,
While awareness gasps for space.

How simple.
How rarified this consciousness
Taken for granted,
Often ignored,
Ever patient,
Even as chemicals oft times derail direction,
As gasps continue.

To escape.
To lie among the grasses.
To splay one's existence for message
Even as awareness remains short of breath.

But, oh…

To be.
To witness.
To become as one with earth,
Air,
Water,
The human totality needing not to gasp for space.

So many know the drill,
But so few willing to Oorah,
Accepting relationship with the ant,
The hawk,
The melting snows,
The rainbows.

And so…

Awareness continues to gasp
For the shared breath of the universe.


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Reviewed on December 6, 2017
You get right into the very soul of your reader and "force" him to see the reality of it all. Outstanding!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on December 6, 2017
yes, the best way to reach awareness is thru the proper breathing. Why is this so? Because we consist of gas, liquid and solid body. . . the air is on top and therefore closer to our primal home we all have come here from. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 6, 2017
I never felt more alive than when I was in the wilderness. With what I know now, I'm not sure I could have lived very long there without the modern conveniences of water and food, shelter and communication.

Still, that awareness is in me… That primal feeling… That I cherish and helps me stay on the right path had not caught up in cults and other falsehoods that are so prevalent in our hectic lives.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 5, 2017
I like the way you link breath to awareness in this meditative poem. The graphic, by the way, is unbelievable.


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