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Beyond Quiet

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Thursday, December 14, 2017


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Beyond Quiet

While neurosciences probe deeper
Into that place beyond quiet,
Where radiator rumble,
Refrigerator hum,
Pipe rattling
Ceases to be.
The why of our hidden thinking core
Remains ever revealing.

Even as a dog knows
Beneath opening and closing mouth yawns,
An alley cat fathoms
While cleaning silently in the night,
Adults know little
Of the silence of thought beyond,
Save the innate noise that precedes
Pursuit of such quiet revelations.

Perhaps insight remains reluctant,
Fearful of its own discovery,
Where lexicons unknown
Will articulate shadowed inflorescence,
Where blooms of vision will implore,
Just as a baby discerns
Sight's first experience
And pleads for more.

Innocence…

Always tenuous,
Remains accessible to the courageous,
Returning the joy of life’s first sensorial awareness
To those fearless of time.

We can only wonder…

Will our destiny's dawn reveal
A rare sense of security,
Where serenity becomes fate's guide into darkness
Where for the moment,
Light might continue sleeping
In the depths of deepness,
That place beyond quiet?


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 16, 2017
Based on the first stanza, a lonely room can provide enough quiet for a poet to become a philosopher and great writer. Where, a rough-and-tumble, active life with many noisy tasks keep one away from that necessary quietness that spawns great thinking.

Makes me wonder with all the noisy technological devices we now have to keep us busy and engaged 24/7 with or we will no longer spawn great thinkers if everyone is involved in superficial engagements all the time.

The idea of a place that is quiet beyond quiet scares me a bit… It sounds like death.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 15, 2017
You delve here into the world of silence in an interesting way, leading it seems to a sense of serenity "where serenity becomes fate' guide into darkness. Animals knows; we have yet to know. Fine work here.

Reviewed on December 14, 2017
While "under" during my brain surgery, I did find this perfect "silence" and it was beautiful and I did not want to leave. Oh, yes. There is "Light" in "That place beyond quiet?"!!

Love ya!

Jane


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