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Cabled Reality

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It’s easy to forget survival has many iterations.

Tuesday, February 6, 2018


Poem Artwork
Cabled Reality

The aged veteran sits idly
Upon rocker and barren porch,
Remembering

Unlike a space suit,
Its every fiber fit
By rigid established standard.

Unlike the starched khaki shirt,
Its extremities forged firm as armor,
Its pleats kept at attention.

Unlike the dress blues,
Symbolic of authority and command,
Unyielding in its façade of glory.

The sweater,
Like love,
Molds to behavior,
Forever willing to comfort the flesh
And bring warmth to the heart.

As passion's woven threads
Assimilate the wearer's hardships,
Fear of frayed ends disappear,
Knowing acceptance of entwined living
Is blessed with accident and wear.

Affection asks little in return,
Needing only to be spared
The folding into a drawer
Of forgotten recall.

Given care,
The patience of love
Remains forever dedicated,
Embracing any and all it touches.

And…

Like the tattered loyal sweater,
Judges not the body,
But dutifully complies,
Abiding the ever shrinking collapse
Of a life fully lived.

A Marine veteran rocks slowly to sleep,
His memories of the nautical Jacob's ladder,
The ship’s up-rope to safety,
Its down-rope into a barge to shoreline’s hell.

He smiles at yesteryear’s challenge of death,
The sweater’s tattered cable weave held close…

Reality just is.


 


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Reviewed on February 7, 2018
Superb! This piece touches the heart. So lovely!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 7, 2018
I love the way you interwove the sweater's ability to provide comforting warmth to the aging body of a veteran. Who, despite tight fitting uniforms of discipline, can now let go and remember how those rope ladders allowed him to climb down into a cold, wet sea of battle and then return safely to his ship climbing back up them again.

Rope as a tool of battle being signified when placed on his shoulders as a reward for service well done.

Ron

Reviewed by Jansen Estrup
Reviewed on February 7, 2018
Warm ...

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on February 6, 2018
A very nicely knitted together poetic song. As a veteran who served for over 24 years, this poem is much appreciated.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 6, 2018
Love this image of the sweater and what you have done with it in this poem. A very tender, insightful poem.


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