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Blindly Climbing

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For all those who find success within, where self-esteem and self-respect reside, this piece of prosetry is for the populace of delusionists seeking self-worth from the outside. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, February 18, 2018


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Blindly Climbing

How real the delusion of success.
How deceptive the climb.
How blindly we climb.

No more luck
than pinning the tail
on the donkey,
but we line up,
take our place in the queue,
blindfold secure,
wait our turn,
or cut through line.

The rungs…

Ah, the gamble to win,
the reaching up,
grabbing the next surprise.

Will it be coated in sandpaper?
The climb always starts with just a bit of discomfort.
We pause…

Someone passes us,
like a rat in a race,
opting to be the first to get the cheese,
or the first to be thrown off.

Oops…

Just a heavy wind gust falling past me,
the screech of failure echoing down
where the crowd below
cheers for more to fall,
get pushed off,
or become hopelessly entangled
on the surprise rungs of razor wire.

Greed’s spectator sport
will always remain alive and well


So many above struggle,
afraid but willing to fail,
grunting,
swearing,
praying,
whatever the mode of enablement,
to be atop the ladder.

The groundswell of cheers, boos, cursing,
help those who can only watch
remain content with their bloodlust-jealousy and envy.

From above…

Shouts of resentment reveals the ladder’s disappearance,
the tempest clouds daring the blind ascendance
to continue reaching beyond what can be had.

Another falls.

Plunging from the gray veiled rungs,
the scream, followed by another, and another…

Like a coliseum frenzy at a gladiator battle,
the crowd chants plaudits,
convincing themselves of the
prestige,
riches,
luxury,
honor,
power,
they too are entitled too,
they cast
rocks,
bottles,
sticks,
and bricks
at the survivors clinging
with callous palms,
dripping blood,
anguished tears,
all for…

In the aftermath…

Some might be asking
if this kind of climbing is worth the darkness
that inevitably visits many.

All the while…

The next crowd of wannabes
muster their tenuous courage
for their shot at blindly climbing.

And the reward is what?



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Reviewed on February 20, 2018
"reward"???? Depending on which ladder a person is "climbing", there's always someone licking their chops and waiting for you to mess up but acting like your "friend". They are all out for themselves. Their motives are not pure. Great write!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on February 20, 2018
To know the corporate life is to live on this wobbly ladder
of lies, deceit, and back-stabbing at its worst.
The only part of it that is worth the while
is to speak of it in the past tense.
So well said.

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on February 19, 2018
another keeper Odin

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 19, 2018
For those few that make it to the top in that mad scramble, some find it quite empty and lonely up there. Not at all what they pictured on the way up. So many losing and being thrown aside while others scramble over them, bribing, cheating and subterfuge just to get ahead.

There are always those that get to the top too fast and without resources..


Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on February 18, 2018
It's all a great struggle, as aptly described here in this poem, but the inner struggle and the realization of success from within is the only lasting success. Otherwise it is just "the darkness that inevitably visits many . . . and the reward is what?"


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