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Life-Mapping

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Trying to understand the chartered course of our short time on earth may seem impossible for those with finite beliefs. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, March 4, 2018


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Life-Mapping

How telling,
That which is thought lost
In folds of one’s map.

Easily forgotten traverses
Of forbidden goals
Remembered well
Where creases squeezed tight
Once shown clear one's youthful terrain.
Those unmarked paths taken off the beaten track,
Beset by thorns and poison,
Rivaled only by the indomitable spirit of immortal dreams,
Daring defiance once lived with abandon,
A course memory left marked on the map,
Now a deep wear-torn crevasse in memoriam.

Came later goals.

Lofty peaks.

Longer treks.

Rest stops feared and postponed.


Finally…


Challenges tempted the ever higher,
Pathfinder instincts gave direction
Around and across tributaries
Of life’s melting adolescence.

How telling,
The transition,
The traverse
Across wiser routes,
The gaze upon pinnacles
One once knew were unconquerable.

How revealing,
These mountainous passages,
Life's ever changing topography,
The rock-hard experience ultimately dispersing to scree,
Tapering to a valley floor Time's patient erosion
Marking a well spent experiential acclimatization
For the expedition readying its next venture
Outside one's neatly folded map.

With so many uncharted experiences
Remaining among the eternal challenges,
First steps await.

More life-mapping
Begins its ever-folding rewards…

Again.




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Reviewed on March 6, 2018
For some reason I find the transitions sensual in that first steps are always the most exciting. Map on, dear Bard!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 5, 2018
The subliminal image of the mapping of a lifetime tells me more than your poem. It is like Freud wrote. Most of our lives are tied up in our subconscious sexual desires. They are the drivers that take us to the mountaintops, long treks and beyond. Is it not so?

Ron

Reviewed on March 5, 2018
I just wonder, one's mapping out life is for living or for succeeding in life?. . Definitely, without mapping you cannot win the world, but what will you do with the entire world? a piece of worsmithing. Cheers, alex

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 4, 2018
Life-mapping is indeed a challenge, as you have so aptly and succinctly described in this poem. The line that strikes me most: "First steps await." Yes, I like to think of every step as a first step or possibly the last, either way to make them matter.

Reviewed on March 4, 2018
Benisons and salutations to the creator of this poetic philosophical Star.

"Life-Mapping" strikes the cerebrating dynamo, and leads one on ontological thoughts of reincarnation and metempsychosis.

Once I was taught by Poet Aberjhani that "The most important part of a poem is not in what it expresses, but in the vision it creates."

"Life-Mapping" sings to knowledge and wisdom.

Viva the Poet!

In reverent appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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