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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Birth's Endless Reflection

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Might most memories be a narcissistic desperation to make yesterday today, even as chance for tomorrow is Nature’s way? (Image by Dali)

Monday, March 12, 2018


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Birth’s Endless Reflection

Moments Alone in darkness
Removed from day’s imitation
Invites inner quiet as reality’s comfort.
 
Closing one’s eyes
Reveals childhood playgrounds,
Where companions shared aloneness,
Telling of secrets,
Those” once” stories filling idle time
While cocooned in tree house intrigue.
 
Such memories…

Like under-rock-secrets
Found in shadowy woods,
Forever remaining as straying-off-trail-discoveries,
One’s finish line for life’s stormy relay,
A cross country run through time,
Finally becoming circuitous blurs in the sky.
 
For some…
 
Time’s aspect bears not a father’s face,
Nor the big and little hands of a mother,
Once gently nudging hours along

Instead…

Paternal time now relaxes
Into Daliesque imaginings for survival. 
All names and images eventually merging
As a lamina among leaves,
Cradled and carried by the wind,
Where the colors of remembrance flickers
Like one’s personal book of candles,
One’s timeless pages once read by light’s burning,
Becoming, at last, finally, peacefully,
Birth in perpetuity.

Such is the infinite life of existence.


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Reviewed on March 14, 2018
'Love those moments when I am able to reflect and concentrate on the fun I had growing up and the "secrets"....... 'Can't wait to do it again!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 13, 2018
You write of childhood "secrets" as though you remember vividly what was said. I find that quite intriguing because my memories are more of action and camaraderie rather than actually what we said to one another except in a very few cases where what was said still stands firmly in my mind.

Your last line refers to the life of existence. As an existentialist, unless I write those stories, those tales of my youth down, they will be lost in time. You reminded me to write them down very soon. For they are very precious to me and may be of use to those who might read them a thousand years from now.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 12, 2018
First you delve into childhood memories in mysterious venues such as playground, tree houses, probing under rocks. Then you come up with some incredible lines:

"a cross-country run through time"
"Time's aspect bears not a father's face"
"one's personal book of candles"

Now that's poetry.

Reviewed on March 12, 2018
Greetings to Poet Odin Roark.

When the legitimate literati finds the author of "Birth's Endless Reflection" ~ the literary pages of this country will have his name highlighted with platinum and golden underlines.

I have read an exquisite composition of poetic philosophic paintings with hues of wisdom.

Viva the Poet!

In reverent appreciation,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


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