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Sapient Conceit

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The evolution of language, like fractals, experiences recurring similar patterns, often at progressively smaller scales, revealing a random and chaotic nature such as in crystal growth, fluid turbulence and galaxy formation, suggesting chance plays no small role in the history of linguistic expression as well as silent communication. (Image by allemagne)

Friday, April 27, 2018


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Sapient Conceit
by Odin Roark

From the grunts of primitive history
evolved the erosive, often subtle sound
of vibration’s gaping mouths,
like yowling crevasses echoing into words
fearfully voiced from lips, if closed,
uttered only the silence of thought.

How Punchinello this expression called vocabulary,
where intellect’s immutable dance-symbolesque
feels it must manipulate like a puppeteer,
determining what is seen, heard,
and ultimately felt deep inside.

Desperately…

We cling to our tethered language,
fearing loss of grip will occasion precipitous failure
into glaciate-layers of lingual fossils,
words uttered carelessly with little thought,
fracturing our resolve into scree-like projectiles
careening internally out of control,
rendering us defenseless and immobilized.

Resilience prevails,
patiently allowing restless valleys
of linguist silence to roil through evolution’s next lingua franca,
becoming the next iteration of sounds and symbols,
destined as fresh and new…
so we tell ourselves.

For some,
to take a moment of calm to stare into the eyes of their cat or dog,
or a trip to the zoo, is to per chance witness silent versions
of language and communication that seeks no superiority,
only the willingness to allow a bit more primitive acceptance
to balance man’s sapient conceit.
  

 


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Reviewed on May 1, 2018
No lie! I was staring into my cats eyes before I read this and she would move her head about as if she was understanding me. I believe I'll go give her a treat! One for you as well for this cool thinking you have offered us.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 28, 2018
Wow. "so we tell ourselves" 'Punchinello' is a word you don't often hear. According to Merriam Webster's: "a fat short humpbacked clown, or buffoon, in Italian puppet shows". You're not embracing your thoughts here as a developing philosophy I hope. I'd like to imagine this being more the notions of a character (you've created) who has gotten jaded, cynical, and frustrated. As I told another writer recently: I have (personally) found, through abundant life-struggles, failures, wars, teachings, and experiences, that self-expression is the dominant necessity of human nature. Everything created - visible or invisible - conveys a message, as you have done potently here. r


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