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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Beloved Guardian

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The state of love is many things to many people. For some of us, making love something beyond the Hallmark Card traditional definition is an important life quest. (Image by Flotolia)

Tuesday, May 29, 2018


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Beloved Guardian

To think of my beloved as Guardian,
is to know she teaches me
that all everyday hazards of living
can be overcome.

Her mouth,
that tunnel winding through the voicing
of life’s many mountains and valleys,
always imbues my trust in light appearing at the end.

Those eyes,
like the lens of a lighthouse,
forever warns me of danger
while guiding my journey away from rocky shores.

Oh, those hands,
gentle fingers that touch beyond my body,
arrest my most private chambers of thought
and lessen the weight of unresolved problems.

And the unflagging arms,
those ever faithful extensions of her kindness,
always ready to lift my despair,
pushing me where I need to go,
detouring my tendency to drift.

The ever ready tireless legs and feet,
mobilized energy urging me
toward the light beyond shadowed fear,
empowering my desire to overcome barriers.

Yet…

Hovering about her fortress of strength
the essence of her being coalesces with mine,
becoming that place where auras morph
into a peaceful sojourn of aloneness together,
where acceptance of One with the universe
is both frighteningly calm,
and gratefully truthful.


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Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on May 30, 2018
One of your best! A masterpiece as well. Bravo!

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 30, 2018
After several tries, I believe you have found your true soulmate by the description in your prosetry. You and I share the same wonder. Just this morning, she reminded me how much she means to me as she devoted a few moments entirely to me, pulling me from my reading and giving me that undeniably close affection that we have for one another unbroken now for 26 years, regardless of circumstance.

Very revealing, but a pleasure to read and identify with.

Ron

Reviewed on May 30, 2018
Yes! Everything you wrote will certainly cause us to accept the "One with the universes"! Yummy stuff!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 30, 2018
the entire poem comes to its pinnacle with the lines:
"becoming that place where auras morph
into a peaceful sojourn of aloneness together."

With that kind of unity, then yes, calm and truthful.

Well done.

Reviewed on May 29, 2018
A beautiful tribute to your beloved guardian. Enjoyed!

Sandie

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 29, 2018
A moving piece. "the essence of her being coalesces with mine" If two have this they are truly blessed beyond words. One is loved because one is loved. No reason is needed for loving. As I once sketched it:
"You flow into me
Without changing the essence
Of whom I’ve become;
But I am more than I am
Because you merge into me"
Really well expressed, Odinsan. Peace... r


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