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Blip of Nothingness

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Contemplating some of Nagarjuna’s thinking on “nothingness,’ I was left considering the existence of that which we know not of, shrouded in the unopened gifts of nothingness. “Since all is empty, all is possible…”. “Things derive their being and nature by mutual dependence and are nothing in themselves.” Some might think it enlightenment awaiting. Others will think it nonsensical ramblings. Pity. (Image by cosmosup)

Wednesday, August 1, 2018


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Blip of Nothingness

How elusive this hide and seek cosmos,
allowing humanity to remain but a tangible blip,
tenuously suspended on Time's infinite screen.

Existence, however, in all its atom-based reality,
lures man's eyes and ears toward layers of the unknown,
perhaps even the empty space,
whose nothingness density remains temptingly
the everything of epiphany's lair.

To be there with distant stars,
to delve into the inner essence of ourselves,
we exercise our prerogative
to contemplate another cosmic entitlement…

Our freedom as part of the blip.

Yet for some thinkers,
perceived freedom
with its implied randomness,
remains an unrealistic concept,
logic dictating correct thought and action
is conclusively deterministic,
save that which is inexpressible,
a conviction of value owned by the individual.

For dialectics can develop conclusions
arising from given sets of postulates or premises,
but resignedly, that is all it can do,
as it is incapable of generating premises itself,
rendering but resultant experience sterile,
capable only to expand, not to truly grow.

Still…

This spec-identity of ours on infinity's screen
continues to delude itself with a Pac-Man sense of conquest
warring, consuming, addicted to immediate gratification,
seemingly unaware of the insatiable flesh-governed mentality.

Humanity is a gift…

But, man’s dichotomy of creativity and self-destruction
seems destined to inevitably reduce our sentient existence
to an even smaller blip, eventuating cosmic dust
in a directionless dervish within reason's desperation,
conceivably paving the only way mankind’s existence
can be part of the distant stars—
small as such may be.
  


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Reviewed on August 20, 2018
I always have fun reading your stuff and then having to look stuff up because I love the way you write, dear Sir. It's always a fun and learning experience!! We are like the people of "Whoville" in "Horton Hears a Who" (Dr. Seuss). Cool story! As is yours, hon.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 2, 2018
"Enlightenment awaiting" "Nonsensical ramblings" Consciousness is a miraculous thing. It allows each of us to spread our spiritual and cognitive wings and fly; even if no one understands or cares. Which, in and of itself, is rampant now in our devolving society. Perhaps you could elucidate (if you ever feel led) on why you think mankind would ever need, or want, to be 'part of the distant stars.' I tend to agree with what C.S. Lewis said: "If we find ourselves with a desire that nothing in this world can satisfy, the most probable explanation is that we were made for another world." Yes! Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes, but when you look back everything is different? Your thinking is clear and simple in this, Odin. I value your insights. We are never too old to set another goal or dream a new dream. Well done. Peace... r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 2, 2018
A remarkable poem that explores what you say at the end: "Humanity is a gift..." that we need to unravel from our own hearts to the distant stars. I love the phrase: "The everything of epiphany's lair."

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on August 1, 2018
Heavy thinking herein, sir, it puts me in mind of a book I used to read regularly, Zen & the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance...interesting ly thoughtful just the same...-e-


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