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Face Living

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Just a contemplation on the way reality creates itself. (Image by Pinterest)

Monday, November 5, 2018


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Face Living

 

Living with the face we get

starts with amoretto cheeks

beneath storybook eyes,

silken strands draped across the brow,

curious noses,

innocent lips.

 

Upon canvases so pure

strokes the brush of time,

dips into the palette of certainty

layering change upon change.

 

Color changes,

some remaining untainted,

others of sun’s burnt-orange delusion.

 

Drying.

 

Cracking.

 

Flaking.

 

What say you of your face?

 

One’s personal artwork

eventually retires to Life’s attic

propped up on memory’s walls that house the past,

when faces didn’t rely on mirrors,

expressions were for their own sake,

not the nip and tuck masks of today

reserved for make-believe reality.

 

To look in the mirror today,

is to accept or reject face living’s reality,

and then…

 



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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 7, 2018
I find nothing to disagree with. Still,
you didn't mention hanging flab. Yuk.
There is no way to pull it, twist it, or invert it
and bring about a smile or a bit of contentment.
The dreaded hanging chad is at least firm if outdated.
If nip and tuck were not so damned expensive, I'd say
bring on the chopping clock.

Reviewed on November 6, 2018
I don't know. I need to go here and there to do what needs to be done and I can't help it but this face has to go with me! Lord!! I've been forgetting the make up......at my age it's tacky! Aging is just that - aging. We don't get younger, my god! Cool write. 'Snaps people back to reality.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 6, 2018
Before mirrors, most people drank from pools of water. When the water was calm and the light was right, they could see their faces and know what they looked like… But it is the Greeks who started the whole tragicomic concern with physical beauty culminating in works like Cinderella.

We all age. Let's just hope we don't age ugly like the no smoking commercials on TV.

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 6, 2018
Hah! Look in the mirrow and see what you want to see, and not what is staring back at you.

Reviewed by John Domino
Reviewed on November 6, 2018
Poetic Truth!

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 5, 2018
Astute observations in this one. Indeed, no matter what, we have to live with our face, just as our poor face has to live with us.


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