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Candy Coated Optics

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Amidst the tragedy of California fires, there remains the tinder box of emotional fraud, taking a rest for now, but poised to arrest the attention of serious observers once again. If only we could see the storms of all types coming. If we could but move out of the way. Reality keeps growing, however. LA County will increase by 3.5 million by 2050. That’s enough to depress one, if it weren’t for the reality of the absurd that will continue propagating for those who find smash-up lives entertaining. How does your city and suburbs look? (Image by pinterest)

Monday, November 12, 2018


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Candy Coated Optics


LA and its San Fernando Valley compost bin
Flanked by mountain walls
Decomposition raging
Choked roads of sunbaked grid lock
Houses upon houses
Boxes piled onto boxes
Richer
Poorer
Fancier
Shittier

Drive by Reality

Poor eye the rich
Rich eye endless wants
Blood-bloated ticks of debt
Cruise side by side
Hummers on the run
Mercs right behind
Phony nails
Phony tans
Corporate coffee
Cute coffee
Strip mall yoga
Storefront Scientology
Think it
You can buy it

Parade of wannabes

Like window display mannequins
Masquerading as humans
Bedecked in ugly clothes
Garish clothes
Compliments of the maker-slaves of China

Argue we might

Bad nightmares end
Candy coated optics linger
Sweet taste addiction thrives

 

 

 



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Reviewed on November 13, 2018
Every girl wants to look like a Barbie Doll and the boys want to be one of these "super' characters. What do they see a real? Killings, wars, lies from the very "top".........The real world they see is scary. Money looms in every form over them, over us, over everybody. The world has gone crazy! Great write, Odin!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 13, 2018
You are so right, most of society is living in n wannabe, plastic world of make-believe, far from reality even though they will claim that they are genuine. It is always something like fires that are raging that bring reality to a head.

I recall when I was in Northern California in the 1960s there was a song about Daly City and its "little houses made of ticky-tacky." An engineer friend of mine discovered that his house was being held up by chicken wire and stucco because termites had eaten all the studs and footers. A secretary of mine with a swimming pool, long neglected from five marriages, found it sliding downhill. Already housing prices were skyhigh and the only new place to build was on fill in San Francisco Bay or 50 miles away. On a couple of visits, LA appeared worse. I interviewed California State-Long Beach and California State-San Fernando Valley and found that I could live there on the salary offered in 1980.

Houston is growing, primarily from immigrants. The business of Houston is no longer oil but business. There is a false sense of prosperity but generally, the whole city is one strip city mall after another with pavement taking over what used to be swampy bayou. A year ago, we got 50 inches of rain throughout the city in two days with hurricane Harvey, an estimated 280,000 homes were lost. Insurance companies have abandoned much of the city. Disaster relief is just costing too much.

When are our people and lawmakers going to focus on our real security problems: population growth and global warming?

Ron

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on November 13, 2018
Still, there are those, who succeed even though all around them life is a tragedy.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on November 12, 2018
What a world we live in. Not especially inviting.


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