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Sun/Cloud Partners

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An exploration into why the sun and clouds are inseparable partners. (Image by pinterest)

Sunday, November 25, 2018


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Sun/Cloud Partners
by Odin Roark

How matriarchal the sun,
Patriarchal the clouds,
Parenting as they do
Nature’s many needs.

Always on call,
Like a healer-team
Mixing the elixir of life,
Readying proper times,
Fulfilling duty’s myriad demands.

At times…

Humans curse this seeming abject conflict
The partnership’s chameleon essence
Forgetting Nature’s free will is just that,
A dichotomy of purpose—reality’s
Idiosyncratic singularity.

Sun and clouds,
Nomads of the natural process,
Facing each other
Often on battlefronts.

Yet…

Like any natural instinct
Sun’s raging fire,
Forever giving needed light and heat,
Knows earth’s rotation
Carrying its water worlds
Of spent frigidity
Must let rise its evaporate escape,
Obeying Nature’s request,
Feeding the ever-hungry atmosphere,
Satiating clouds’ appetite.

Thus…

Clouds attempt caution with their magic,
This ability to cool and nurture
Results of the often-blistering sun.

Earth’s open heart enfolds the saturation
Atop the soil,
Splashing skyward,
Drenching all huddled close.
Man,
Flower,
Tree,
Animal,
Especially life’s unloved weeds,
Never ignored of rain’s compassion.

Yet…

In some lands,
Clouds’ appetite becomes voracious
Rendering hurricanes,
Typhoons,
Tornadoes,
And floods,
Bringing clouds’ frequent mania contrite,
Reminding all that what seems destructive,
Might be Nature’s passionate lament for forgiveness.

Could there be…

Undefined ardor felt by sun and clouds.
This marriage without documents,
This relationship of warmth and often uncontrolled weeping,
This tireless beginning without end,
This companionship of zero judgment,
Knowing only acceptance of one another’s reality?

Despite the yin-yang
Of luminance and shade,
Sun’s heat cannot skip over
The suffocating sands of deserts,
Or aberrant dust bowls of wind ravaged drought.

Nor can the clouds
Always guarantee peaceful visits,
Given wind’s capricious persuasion,
That sometimes-friendly cousin,
Sometimes-angry uncle.

As all modes of cause and effect know,
Maintaining an existence of harmony
Is fraught with chance and timing.


But without sun and clouds,
Nature’s ever-volatile liaison of passion and duty,
The planet’s existence would merely be
The zero sum of naught,
A vacuum of nothingness.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 26, 2018
You have described the earth's water cycle in very poetic terms that up with the hard and spirit for those of us weaned into adulthood under this spectacular display.

Some interesting facts: water vapor in the air cannot be seen. In order for a cloud to appear, there must be a dust particle that water can condense on, and then freeze by the billions into a cloud. The reason that clouds seem to change so rapidly is that many of these ice particles form and then melt and evaporate in very short order--seconds. When water is retained around a dust particle and it gets heavy enough to fall before evaporating, a raindrop forms. Usually picking up other raindrops as it falls, creating larger raindrops in the process.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on November 26, 2018
A singular insight, Odinsan, that only your sharp poetic mind could glean. Not entirely sure how to respond to this except to say that when life seems overshadowed, unremarkable, futile, or despairing, the sun always seems to peek out from behind the clouds, bursting down in sword-like shafts, a small hint of a smile perhaps, and hope returns. Certainly has for me over the years. Peace ole friend. r


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