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Airless Breath

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At the continuing COP24 climate conference in Katowice, Poland, little progress is being made due to a persistent lack of political will. One cannot say enough about our species’ irresponsibility. (Image by D Conway)

Tuesday, December 4, 2018


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Airless Breath

Once a quiet voice of wilderness,
combustion rages,
lifting waves of acrid smoke,
its cargo-catching air streams
compliant carriers of change.

How removed
these forests and factories ablaze,
unaware its distant partner,
Nature’s frozen iceberg world,
shrouded in soot and ash,
calves to the sea.

This residue aftermath
clinging to crystal flakes,
once of precious maintenance
for evolution’s progressive journey,
has become icebergs collapsing.

Bewildered bear and seal seek refuge
as ice-floats break apart,
dissolving our once Nature and climate security
Into liquid desolation.

Yet…

We continue to behave with monetary blinders,
servient denial,
or hollow faith.

Change continues to happen,
its rate unattended and,
like a serpent consuming its tail,
we cling to inaction,
fueling this vortex of insanity

Remaining?

Nature’s final utterance
wearing a trim of tears,
an intricate lace of droplets
around a weeping voice,
echoing Man’s receding wilderness.

Has our planet become
a fracturing collapse
of lamented nakedness
and a forsaken sea of sorrow?

 

 



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Reviewed on December 7, 2018
In reading this, what came to mind is a letter from one of my cousins in Finnish Lapland informing me that it is still green up there. Not good.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 5, 2018
I found Conley's image to be strikingly accurate as a metaphor for what we are doing to ourselves. And I find your mention of "lack of political will" to be a good example of why we can't get government to really get involved in making positive change rather than cater to the annual profit mania of corporate military industrial America.

Your poem poignantly touches on all of the pertinent issues that most can easily perceive and some are still stubbornly clinging to as natural or normal, even in the short term. The good news is, we can shape the future for the better. The bad news is, will we?

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 4, 2018
To answer your final question, perhaps yes, but not just because of climate change and its awful, potential aftermath. There seems to be a climate change within humanity that is seemingly unrecognizable and difficult to deal with.


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