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· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

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· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Truth is One


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· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

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Remembrances

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A prosetry exploration into why so many of the elderly are bid they abandon dreams and fantasy, replacing it all with reality? Might such innocence be but the weight of wisdom merely needing a rest?

Wednesday, December 26, 2018


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Remembrances


Rocking to…

Just a few minutes more,

my horse and me,
almost there.


Remember our primitive forest,
kitchen chairs,
chrome trunks,

broomstick tree tops,
nesting places for the vultures,
always present,
always ready to prey?

Rocking around…

Kitchen cabinet canyons,
scarred timber walls,
smooth worn knobs,
magic door openings,
closet caves for hiding.

Rocking through…

Familiar terrain,
approaching tiered rise,
the climb we've never finished,
Trigger and me,
up into air,
just for us.

Rocking forward…

So much ground to cover,

Nurse Norma always eying me,
touching my shoulder.

She knows
we're almost there,
almost ready to climb,
off old pinto,
once we're to the top.

But…

Not today.


Not enough time.


Group time.


Pill time.


Healing time.


Why do they call it healing time?

Why would I want to heal our remembrances, Trigger?



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Reviewed on December 28, 2018
Exactly, Odin! The good memories way outnumber the bad and those good ones are fun to revisit! You put it all so beautifully AGAIN!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on December 26, 2018
A very clever treatment of childhood reminiscence.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on December 26, 2018
I remember only the nasty things we did as children. Not really, it's just that those things are what would be interesting to write about and I haven't, yet.

I certainly hope I die young with a good looking corpse rather than riding that rocking horse to pill heaven and healing time.

Ron

Reviewed by A. Frailey
Reviewed on December 26, 2018
The imagination of our childhood leaves us bereft at times... So glorious, our glimpse into what could be. One reason I love being in the presence of children, not to be a child again but simply to know that childhood still exists.
Lovely thought. Thanks for sharing.


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