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Shiver and Flutter

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For all of us… and them, just a bit of levity, prosetry style. (Image by pinterest)

Wednesday, January 9, 2019


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Shiver and Flutter

 

Between double weather pane glass,

you stare at me as I wash dishes,

and I stare back and wonder…

 

You ought to take a trip.

After all, if you got in this window,

you can get out.

 

Hell of a place to spend winter, don’t ya think?

 

Just sayin’…

 

You ought to try palace living.

You know, like a king.

Avoid the shiver and flutter

of a winter-window-survival.

 

Bet you’d like a platform and wall made to order,

like a bed and chair fly style.

Add in a radio playing the favorites

of other winged friends lounging in Rio and Dakar,

and around the pool at The Brando in French Polynesia.

Yeah.  His island, where pastries are served on inlaid plates

of abalone and mother of pearl,

your coat of arms...kinda, eh?

 

Really.  They have a lot of you guys there too

 

And…

 

The best part?

There are courtiers ready to catch you

a lady companion from among the flies

grooming themselves on fresh road kill

and flotsam.

 

C’mon.  Beats hell out of shivering all winter

And staring back at me.

 

Dishes are finished for today.  Damn.  Our dreams can be so

unrealistic, eh? 

 

On your own, buddy.

 

Later.

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 10, 2019
A nice flight of fancy to a fly's world. And yes, flies get themselves trapped in the most unlikely of places. In spite of your entreaties, it is highly unlikely in the short life of a fly, unless they get a ride on a airline past all the security, that if they fly good fly off to those fabulous places to be swatted among the finest of entrées.

Ron

Reviewed on January 10, 2019
As I was reading this, I pictured "The Fly" with the human face! I believe it would love to go to the places you mentioned but, again, got stuck "in between" again! Oh, no! I enjoyed this a lot!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 9, 2019
A bit of levity for a chance. Thoroughly enjoyed this one.


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