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· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

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Brushstrokes

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As attached to the now as we might be, change is inevitable. (Image by Kunstmaler Nottrott)

Wednesday, January 16, 2019


Poem Artwork

 

Brushstrokes


Knowing not age, life's mind colors,
Like the number-paintings stored in attic webs,
Merely become dust covered pleasures of memories past,
When Ferris wheels rotated dreams,
Calliope horses pole-galloped adventure,
Cotton candy played catch-me-if-you-can.

How easily our youth painted the future,
Laid down colors most apparent,
Reds of sunset passions,
Blues of sky reflected oceans,
Yellows of cornfield hide-and-seek
Green making all the falling down plush as summer lawn.

Primary hues,
Like even-numbered shapes,
Fall short the color containment.
Boundaries bleed.
Chance pushes discovery.
Mustards find full-up dance cards.
Purples hemorrhage bruises once flawless cover.
Gray becomes reality's true color.
No blacks.
No whites.

Simple brush strokes
Evolve to palette knife strata,
Thickness of time layers over,
Numbered boundaries melt away,
Framed borders cease to be.

How perfect this wanderlust,
Wisdom's gift-wrapped beginnings,
Ever grateful the loft-stored memories,
Thankful the web's defending watch
Protects time’s morphing colors,
Now with no names,
No “clinging” identity.

 

Such is…

Initiation's flirtatious way,
Patiently mixing aroused shades,
Tints and dyes to be cast for…

 

Tomorrow’s brushstrokes.



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Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on January 17, 2019
You took us through the ever-changing world of life, from young to the ages we gasp the wonders we become.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on January 17, 2019
The Technicolor images of our lives past, brilliantly rolled out in a poem.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on January 17, 2019
A piece as colorfully brushed as the image; which, as I see it, has multiple interpretations. One of them being, how my intestines feel the day after I eat Mexican food with too much jalapeno. )-: Seriously, security and sameness are integral parts of human existence. It can, though, be a nemesis to the creative mind. Staying engaged with ones gifts, through all the many changes, requires foresight, and unwavering discipline. Many give up. Enjoyed. Peace... r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on January 16, 2019
I love the way you brushstroke elements of people's live with color. Excellent.


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