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Smiles

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A flash fiction exploration re: Might it be that losing the ability to smile is the only failure you need regret? “Don’t cry because it’s over smile because it happened” – Dr Seuss. (image by cloe services.fr)

Sunday, July 21, 2019


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Smiles

 

 

Inside…

 

The hot weekend found him

sweating in his East Village apartment

typing his memoir, “My History of Effort.”.

 

A large Carrion visitor

to the hotdog vendor at curbside below

flew up through his open window

and determined to bother a writer for a change.

 

“Not a good place for your exploration on that keyboard,

my blue-winged friend.”

 

The writer’s glance toward Killer, the cat,

suggested he too was bothered by the intrusion,

but not enough to jump-start his scarcity of adventure.

 

Outside…

 

The writer’s aged landlady extended a brown-spotted hand,

dropped coins into the vendors palm while he passed a simple Sabrett dog to her,

the summer heat bearing down on her aged smile,

a reflection of the bright promise of hunger’s satiation.

 

Inside…

 

After staring out at the unexpected picture of simple joy on her face,

he gave flight to his fingers and an optimistic fusion of key taps

prompted a “hopeful” paragraph,

reminding him that much of misfortune

could be given solace with the simplest of rewards,

if only one could maintain the ability to smile.

 

Inside the inside

 

His moist eyes glistened with smiles of epiphanous joy,

as he gently blew the fly off his keyboard…

stroked his cat’s head…

and leaned toward the window to watch the landlady finish her hotdog…

still smiling.

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed on July 22, 2019
As long as one can smile things aren't so bad. Man, we could have it so much worse. This story/poem tells me that the "landlady" was grateful for the little things in life. You have put her "smile" into my mind and have made me smile as well, Odin!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 22, 2019
A nice little slice of life during summer in the city. I like how you softly touched on the gentle pleasures of aging. The blue jay was the stroke that made the piece all the more interesting.

It is truly sad that many stroke victims can no longer smile. Perhaps that's why they often break into tears. Memories of when they could move, but no longer can.

Ron

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on July 22, 2019
Hope I never lose the ability to smile as well as laugh. And when having your picture taken, say "money" instead of "cheese," You can't help but form a smile when you say money.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on July 22, 2019
There is indeed a thousand messages in a single smile, beautifully rendered here in this simple story poem.


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