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· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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· Truth is One


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· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

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Breathing Snapshots

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Revisiting Campbell McGrath’s writings, some thick dust gets blown away, begging a visit to one’s own attic of mind-play. For us all, there is an end. How we embrace it is what counts, yes? (Image by Florian Nicolle)

Sunday, August 18, 2019


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Breathing Snapshots

 

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Waxy paper

cartooned respite

chewy pink

bubbles small

messes big

don't you be blowin' them

your brows be shaved

daunted mother

silly child

 

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Driver's license

double feature drive-in

windows open

friends in next car

cuddle up seats

brown bagged cherries

stems to pull

pits to suck clean

stomach aches ignored

paper peeled straws

blowgun ammo

shot between cars

shoring up boredom

while girlfriend gazes

Jimmy Dean's red jacket

up there four stories tall

 

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Makin' it on my own

lonely brownstone

Central Park always dark

letters few

collectors many

pay or else

notice this

notice that

Oops

the draft is nice

they say

three squares a day

see the world

'til you don't

 

Dark storms

rain down shrapnel

brain entangled

sunrise runs

nature hides

evil's time

 

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Smiles

smiles

door to door

vacuum cleaners rule

used car

crazy wife

crazier life

now that's a neat package

'til it's not

 

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Jack is good

Smirnoff bad

bar mirrors in front 

noise in back

cacophonous peanut shells below

orchestrating stubby pencil

upon napkins write

verse or prose

doesn't matter

rewrapping

neat packages those 'til

 

'til glad hand extends

binds me in different wrappings

dust jacket shines

mailbox stays empty

dust jacket gone

 

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Someday

an old shep will appear

giving neat packages

for me to bag and seal

while we

walk the walk

bark the talk

shuffle left

shuffle right 

finding straight ahead

 

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Breath's final

neat package

patiently waiting

to be wrapped

 

but until then

 

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Reviewed on August 20, 2019
You just take us right down that road of life, now, don'tcha, Odin? You do it so well. I love the style in which you put this forward!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed on August 19, 2019
Truthful, negative, lonely , and so well done. How do we hang on to the better moments?


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