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Mortality's Countdown

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

- After reading a Times article re: Kafka’s last trial, I couldn’t help but find myself exploring the many years in New York, reviewing what I/we dream. In this invention of Time, is Man meant to perceive chronological events in a horizontal passage, or is the age of existence vertical in nature, all experiences as one, all of existence happening simultaneously, everything happening now as both memory and the immediate moment? Do we merely choose from a vertical "nowness," determining that which suits our needs through Time's mechanism, that irrefutable power of governing most of our thoughts? (Image by pinterest)

Monday, August 19, 2019


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Mortality’s Countdown

 

 

Time

          Invented by man
          to fill empty places.

 

          Most dream easily,
          but in The City of handless clocks?

 

Ticking illusion awaits allusion

 

          As the subway empties
          and yesterday's leather straps fade out,
          their idle swing overhead but a shadow dance in balance,
          gray plastic molds give way to orange upholstered benches,
          Brooks Bros' melancholy shades,
          skinny ties beneath cunning eyes,
          waiting for hula-hoop hips.

 

          brush this...

 

          touch that…

 

          while Herald Tribune folded accordion style
          stretches forward from tortoise shell glasses
          standing atop Florsheim wingtips hugging undercarriage tightly,
          shoeshine woes for those with dough
          listening fearfully,
          feeling carefully,
          whispering morning prayers,
          pick-pocket blues
          stay 'way from me.

 

Ticking silently

 

          Into Kafka-like adding machine offices
          once thriving with hourly wages,
          now awaiting wrecking balls,
          their barren floors still alive with ether of shuffling ambition,
          the Mad Men walls now but cobweb mantles in limbo,
          commerce caves of dust-etched ghosts
          staring vacuously skyward
          for...

 

Ticking anxiously

 

          Ah,
          the Happy Hour
          that's every hour,
          for a bar is a bar
          even without people,
          even when chairs are stacked on tables
          and tired neon Pabst Blue Ribbon flickers down
          square-toed Fryes with brass
          peeking out from bleach-stained bell bottoms
          held up by matching brass belt,
          gouging attention away from satin shiny shirt
          draped over pocket-less-bun-heaven eye candy.

 

          Dollar a shot.
          Make it two.
          Hit me again ‘til after 3 AM
          and Time delivers
          the Klee-like night of color and clashing.

 

Ticking loudly

 

          42nd street once more than just a cross-roads,
          now a glittering cover for continued
          bright-lit consumption,
          waiting to become just another passage of time.

 

          Forever the Taxi Driver's lament,
          windshields mirror,
          slumbering skies invaded by
          glaring marquee lights,
          bulbs 1-5-7 burned out,
          2-4-8 & 9 blinking,
          its strobing stabs at eyes gazing out
          from a backseat respite.

 

          The checkered yellow stops,
          just another all-nighter about to wind down,
          emptying the cab of another memory in progress.

 

          From sunrise train,
          to ledger sheet hell,
          to Happy Hour escape,
          to bright lights dream-believe.

 

Ticking stops

 

          The Big Empty now
          at night train's end of the line,
          that place where war-torn stairwells lead
          through turnstile exits,
          up past thirst craved walls
          of more littered passages
          leading to…

 

          A nocturnal desert's oasis
          about to become
          a city's sunrise,
          where gull,
          pigeon,
          ferry boat,
          and sky
          meet.

 

          A surreal wonderment waiting
          today's empty places,
          standing free,
          ready,
          its memory made eternal by handless clocks
          while Time’s sentinels parade-dress for tomorrow…


          bemused.

 

 



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Reviewed on August 20, 2019
The city never sleeps! Doesn't it see the clocks? OH!!! The clocks have no hands, that's why! So cool a way to describe the phenomena!
You took me through the city and sights with your fine wordsmithing!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 20, 2019
Your recollections of New York pieces (IMO) are very different than the rest of your writing. Something of that city has taken up permanent residence in the guts of your originality. It's almost as if you were destined to write about it. Enjoyed this mucho. The imagery is excellent. Well done. r

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on August 20, 2019
A cornucopia of surreal images to accompany the passage of time thru its various stages of movement until it stops. Indeed "the night train's end of the line" is the end indeed. The reader, like the poet, ends "bemused".


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