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Glaciated Echoes

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Whether in the wintery mountains of Afghanistan, Russia, or the frigid imprisonments of North Korea, a conqueror’s aspirations are destined to repeat the chronicled past and become still more…

Friday, September 6, 2019


Poem Artwork

 

Glaciated Echoes

 

Our sentimental past

Our repetitious future

Bound together

By hope and fear

Continues as dangerous hostage

As captors prepare their next demand

 

Though some might shudder

Such ransom seems paltry

To Power’s hubristic blindness

Straining to reach

A wintery summit patiently waiting

Forever luring the determined

 

Upon these storm-scarred peaks

The shelter hut grins

As crystalized mistakes

Remain one’s host

 

Within its four walls

Stocked with wood

But not kindling

Packaged nourishment

But past expiration dates

A wedged open door

Enjoins icy gusts

Dancing their last-note refrain

To Hope’s frozen calliope dream

Once a carousel’s innocence

Now a whirlwind of fright

 

Many try

But hypothermic dreams take over

Delivering happy endings

Knowing not

Delusions forever satisfy

Evil’s model of successful failure

Those rules of romantic notion

Denouncing Truth as bogus

 

Such for many

Antiquity's legacy

 

This frozen journey

Today’s repeat of yesterday

This perpetual Phoenix

Ice-covered in its ashen nest of flaming contradictions

Affronts Reality

Like some whirling dervish

Of gluttonous Nature

One’s anomalous Leviathan

Aberrational cotton candy

Frozen on one’s tongue of childish deceit

 

But

 

Climb

Grab

Crawl

Go they

We

Us

Moral impotence bowing to

Control’s infantile persistence

Evil’s innocent drippings

Enveloping misguided yearnings

Into but another layer

 

Tomorrow’s fossilized history

As 

Glaciated Echoes

 

The kind that never disappear.

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 8, 2019
I believe this is a metaphor for people whose attitudes and thoughts are frozen in the past cycles treating war as glory and wealth as respect. Seeking to live under benign Gods and Kings rather than think for themselves, breaking the ice to a new way of looking at the world.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on September 8, 2019
A piece dripping with potent images. Your view of things is uniquely you Odin. Maybe in this final season of hateful global meltdown, the insidious author of man's insistent megalomania, will be brought into full view, chained, and thrown into a pit for 1000 years. All the best. r

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on September 7, 2019
So true! Inhumane acts are frozen in time in a thousand different ways, but they always remind us that even the lowly virtue of tolerance is still far beyond the distant horizon. Kudos.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on September 7, 2019
An excellent write, with much truth in it. And I have to say, there were so many great lines in this piece, it's hard to pick a favorite one. Well done.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 6, 2019
From the title, one wonders what it may all mean, until the poem unfolds in glowing specificity and we come to see very clearing what it all may mean: "Moral impotence bowing to control's infantile persistence." Another powerful jab at today's world.


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