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Continuance

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some of us, fear of passing on is but an inept attempt to perpetuate the same ol’, reminding us once again of the other “What if?" (Image by pinterest)

Monday, September 23, 2019


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Continuance


Life's tsunami starts way back,
shifting tectonics of time
re-form further evolution,
one's bargained death wish in disguise.

Most know not when disturbance begins,
when spilled milk begins to teach,
when failure begets wisdom.

From cradle to grave we're taught
you can't have that.
Preschool.
Elementary.
Middle.
High.
Higher.
Ah…
the onion skin diploma,

the admission ticket.

PERFECT JOB

Do this,
and quid pro quo.


Eight-hour workday.
No.
Twelve-hour workday.
Yes.
Be reasonable.
No.
Shark-infest your waters.
Yes.
Earn your bonus.
No.
Scheme your advance.
Yes.
Retire with honor.
No.
Cash in beating the system.
Yes.

PERFECT RELATIONSHIP

Honest background.
No.
Fabricated heredity.
Yes.
Thinking.
No.
Status quo.
Yes.
Intelligence used
No
Entitlement expected.
Yes.
Quiet and focused.
No.
Loud and scattered.
Yes.
Enjoined.
No.
Divorced.
Yes.

ONE DAY

The next random shift erupts,
sending innate calendars asunder.


You're finally unrestricted.
No more corralling of instinct.
No more downside to curiosity.
No more programs to die by.

INFINITY CALLS

Shackles fall free.
Unhappiness exits.
Flames cleanse bodily disease.
Smoke and cloud transport molecules of ecstasy to form a new.

NEXT STOP

Catching the first breeze to nowhere,
to everywhere,
to schedules unknown,
to existence sans time,
where chance be not tabled,
where worth be not an issue,
and day and night be one
with all that
was
is
and will ever be.

WELCOME HOME

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 24, 2019
I especially like the alternate forced choice, yeses and noes of life, that we fall into with the best intentions and come out disenchanted with. Good stuff!

I believe I'm right when I caught a case for cremation. Truly, the ultimate freedom of our molecules. Far better than burying ourselves in boxes that are supposed to keep the bugs away, but eventually, don't. And those expensive gravestones that mark our spot. A thousand years from now, will they have any meaning at all when the names of kings and queens have been lost in oblivion?

But this poem, I will call it a poem, now posted on the Internet, may last nearly forever, the last visage of our existence that can speak to those of the future like I am reading, several hours after it was written, already in the future.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on September 24, 2019
Sounds like a long and bumpy ride to that eternal home that was always there, but we never knew it. I like the trip you take the readers through in this poem, raising issues that people need to think about if they ever wish to come to terms with "reality".


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