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· The Kite That Would Not Bow

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Stumbling Deep

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are times when mistakes seem so obvious, yet such epiphanies for correction sometime come too late to rectify. (Image by playbuzz)

Sunday, October 13, 2019


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Stumbling Deep

 

 

To notice Nature…


Is to know the tulip's heart asks for little
Its petals upon sundown
Folding shield upon shield
Over innocence

 

The sun…


Also of patience
Remains willing to allow
Understands clouds of coolant
Nature's roiling emotion
Occasionally needs to vent

 

Humans…


On the other hand
Know less of endurance
Too occupied with the now
Ignorant of perfection's infinite plan

Like a child's first steps
We wobble through life's forward movement
Paying little attention to personal shields and clouds
Becoming instead
Duplicitous cripples
Unaware we're but habits of illusion
Tumbling still further
Stumbling deeper
Until...

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 14, 2019
That worked for England. Somehow they muddled through, even though Hitler almost got them if United States had not lent a hand.

I believe you're writing that we are on a roll, and rolling in the wrong direction. While many of us sense that we are living wrong, we don't know how to change that and begin to live right. Unfortunately, it may take governmental action, like rationing in World War II, for us all to ditch our current habits for better ones, less driven by advertising and profit, and more driven by good conscience.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 13, 2019
Your opening in this one sublime, with petals folds in upon themselves covering innocence at its heart. Indeed. Indeed, as we continue to take "child's first steps."


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