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Rain Running Innocent

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Nature never promised us a rose garden. We invented that. And what have we given in exchange?

Friday, October 18, 2019


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Rain Running Innocent


So simple
Creation's reflective miniscule
Gathering force at will
Sprinkling nourishment
Sharing its cleansing
Wanting only growth

Such is the mission
Of Nature's most immaculate
The raindrop
Carrier of so many purposes

Inculpable its essence
Being not of calamitous desire
Yet collected by forces undesired
Often Tropical disturbance
Or typhoons
Hurricanes

So faultless
Its guilt

While we admonish its presence
Water spotting our car washes
Spoiling our vacation weekends
Plummeting our gardens
We ignore its due respect

Perhaps...

Embracing the small creature-less life
Might enable this E. T. of Nature's family
Dreaming only of making our lives better
A supportive existence among
Its dedicated landscape

Still

We argue its overwhelming presence
Even as its ancestors of Arctic and Antarctic
Plead for genealogical respect

We continue to deny its nemesis
Man's natural self-destruction urge
Trying to hide behind inept rationale

 

For some
So easy to deny
For all
Impossible to avoid

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 19, 2019
You have taken the metaphor of a raindrop and applied it to human existence. And we would not exist but for the miracle of raindrops. To think for every raindrop there must be a speck of dust in the atmosphere for water vapor to condense on. What kind of miracle is that?

Ron

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on October 19, 2019
This is a very insightful tour into the far-reaching implications of rain, well past anyone's musings but yours. A profound rendering that everyone should read and give careful thought to.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on October 19, 2019
Super thoughts and words bring this magnificant poem to ever-lasting life, Odin. Thanks.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on October 18, 2019
Ah, the beauties of rain and all those raindrops you mention. When you live in the desert as I do, you come to realize the wondrous quality of rain. Cloudy, rainy weather here is considered a good day, not a bad day, and when it rains, everyone one to the windows or outside to take part in the blessings or what you have called "innocent rain".


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