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Heart's Way

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Periodically it’s time to pay homage to the wrong-turns in the rough journey of the heart. It is true that often one has to travel a long distance to go a short way. Such is the case with timeless love, as this poet knows all too well. (Painting by Marek Langowski)

Sunday, May 24, 2020


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Heart’s Way

 

 

A feeling whose origin was unknown

It was never with name

Nor do I remember how it came to be

 

I carried it in my breast pocket

Like a lost or spare button

Save it wasn’t a button

 

From rain-slicked streets

To

All night diners

Dim barrooms

Pool halls and lonely corners

It led an isolated existence

Like the echo of a dream

The storage key on a worn chain

And then it was gone

 

Nameless stops from city to city

As years passed in absent connection

Till a waft of clear air whispered

This is your stop

 

With no destination in sight

My heart ventured upon another empty platform

Where only the faint rumbles of the past filled the air

 

Yet in the distance…

 

Thankfully…

 

Finally...

 

A synchronal heart could be heard beating.

 



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Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on May 25, 2020
Well balanced and conceptualized. And the imagery (for me) effectively captures a black and white mood. Your mind is in rare form here. Great work Odinsan. Stay well. r

Reviewed on May 25, 2020
Sure you could hear "A synchronal heart"! You were the connection all the while and held onto a love that would never die. How romantic! Such a love!!!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on May 24, 2020
I'm almost certain I know the love story behind your powerful words.
This is stunning! My best to both of you. Ed

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on May 24, 2020
The poem, like an echo-y, dreamy, moody film noir, until its black and white feel is given color at the end and a sense of hope and resolution.


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