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Regret Seeking Remission

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

A failure, whether in business or personal life, leaves an emptiness that only time can heal. Like most, struggling with sorrow brings on unique awareness, even after resolve has been met. Still, to have had such an experience and survived, is to grow and respect reality as a sometimes harsh teacher. (Image from pinterest)

Friday, March 26, 2021


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Regret Seeking Remission

 

 

Even as winter ends
the cold persists

Morning awakenings
endure shadows of the past

Everywhere
good wishes collapse mute

Bouquet openings
become but empty vases

Hesitant touches
forever pretend

Intimate whispers diminish to
but a resonance of silence

The simple music
of children's laughter
The comforting essence
of rose petals beneath one's touch
finds captivity mere folly

Time seems to stop
dreams of future
become nightmares of past
The taste of alum tinctures
become forever's aftertaste

When regret finds no escape
and shackles of blame
hold firm inside walls of guilt
clouds remain forever without rain

 

Hopefully

Regret finds remission




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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 27, 2021
As I read this tight, terse and strangling refrain of the result of failure one way or the other, I am reminded of the time when others' perception of me suddenly changed, merely from outward appearance and not in word ability. So sad that so many could not see the worth in me for the simple shriveling of hands.

It took me a long time, but I got over it. Including those found that their love for me was not great enough to take on the task of my decline.

Ron


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