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The Blink

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The question of finding the right time to do anything is more complex now than in past decades, what with the exponential factor of distraction opting to take the focus away from our commitment. Such was the case when I wrote this prologue for my novel “Mind Puppets”. (Image by pinterest)

Tuesday, April 13, 2021


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The Blink

 

Aristotle stood with outstretched arms and wept

 

only the ocean breakers cascading

against the frozen remains of jagged volcanic stone

could cry out as loudly

 

he stood high above the roar on a shelf of rock

jutting out above the rage

like a tongue of relentless defiance

against the elements that reached up to drown

and then erode even this outcrop of resistance

 

below, washing forward and back with the tide

were the crumbled remains of nature's battle lost

where he stood, all was safe--for the time being

 

to his right and left stood metal stands holding reflector boards

the sun was about to set

casting crossed swords of golden light

across his naked body

 

it was as he wished it

a final exposure for a being now covered

with the salty mist of nature's preservative

and nature's destroyer

 

before him on titanium legs

the shutter of his digital camera continued opening and closing

to its pre-set pattern

capturing forever the last chapter of a life he had chosen to leave behind

 

his face was that of a young man turned old and frail

from the experiences that had driven him to this spot

this moment in time

this completion

 

he opened his eyes and peered about him

as tears merged with nature's cleansing

 

photos of a less than proud past rolled before him

Images he thought

of truth and imagination

are out there for me

waiting for my camera

my easel

waiting to be captured

to be layered by my paintbrush

to be consumed

retched

and reborn by my eyes

my voice

 

he arched his back to the sky

perhaps imploring the infinite to

speak to him

comfort him

relieve him of the past

 

no such message came

 

the only shroud of comfort came

by way of cooling shadows

from the wings of a raven

soaring in frozen animation

above the breaker's updraft

 

he opened his eyes

 

the anguish in his face relaxed

 

the raven blinked

 

it was time

 



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 14, 2021
That was quite a prologue, filled with images in my mind of what was going on. An interesting name choice for the protagonist in this case. Makes me want to read on…

The original Aristotle should have should by the seaside and wept for giving us bad science that was believed for a long time until a few people, real scientists, finally had the courage to overthrow his arcane ideas.

Perhaps you have imbued your Aristotle with some of the shortcomings of the original?

Ron


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