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Pin Pricks

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- Most often, memories come in large blocks of space and time, until they don’t. Some even while you sleep. Yet, some are small, small as a pin prick.

Saturday, April 24, 2021


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Pin Pricks

 

Such occasion came his 5th year

A tailored birthday getup

Presented first pinned to a child-sized mannequin

Then clothing the birthday boy

Then sold back to the tailor.

 

Hard times they were

For parents of the depression years.

 

Now…

 

During nocturnal quietness

He often strolls into the poor streets of his Bronx upbringing

Convinced that vintage birthday outfit

Has maintained residence all these years

In the tailor’s window

 

Well, I’ll be…

He’s said to no one.

How the hell…

He’s said aloud as he’s awakened

From the demanding nightly dream

 

‘Course…

 

Living in Tribeca

Moving stocks around on Wall street

And wearing Armani suits daily

Can mess with your head

You know?

 

  Did he tell you…

 

That borough street goes on endlessly

And store to store

Window to window

Lamppost to lamppost

He always has to stop

And try to remove

The pricking pins

From the dark cloth of his years

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 25, 2021
Great symbolic image of the pin pricks that still interweave within the mind of years gone by. Another excellent one in a long line of poems.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 25, 2021
Really love that ending right down to the last line… Superb! And the poignancy of the Wall Street player and the boy that had to give up his birthday suit to put food on the table. The picture is perfect for the poem.

Ron


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