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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

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· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


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· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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Quivering Leaves

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

There are some who dread the years ahead, while as writers, time seems to bring, as its reward, experienced words arriving. And, for still others, a poem or two a day becomes possible. (Image by pinterest)

Wednesday, June 9, 2021


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Quivering Leaves

 

Moments Alone in darkness

Removed from day’s imitation

Invites quiet as comfort

 

Closing one’s eyes

Reveals childhood playgrounds

Where companions shared Alone

Telling of secrets

Once stories filling idle time

While cocooned in tree house intrigue

 

Such memories

Like under-rock-secrets

Found in shadowy woods

Forever remain as straying-off-trail-discoveries

One’s finish line for life’s stormy relay

A cross country run through time

Finally becoming the dial-face in the sky

 

For some

 

Time’s aspect bears not a father’s face

Nor the big and little hands of a mother

Once gently nudging hours along

Instead

Paternal time now relaxes

Daliesque

 

All names eventually merge

As quivering lamina among leaves

Embraced by the wind

Where remembrance flickers

Like one’s book of candles

Timeless pages once read by their own burning

Now

At last

Finally

Peacefully

Like quivering leaves ignited

Words become air-bound in continuance

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on June 10, 2021
You seem to be reaching back into childhood where all the fantasy and imagination truly began. Some memorable lines in this one: "Such memories like under-rock secrets." No matter what the secret is, it fills the childhood mind with awe.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 10, 2021
You touch on a number of aging issues in this poem. It is amazing how some writers can produce poems so easily. Mine usually take about 15 minutes to write and then about four hours to edit and put on the Internet in two places.

And then, the reference to being an orphan and not knowing your lineage very well as a result. Perhaps enhancing your willingness to explore deeper and further into your roots to perhaps reveal your parents and other ancestors long gone.

Ron


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