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Precious For Some

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

For some of us, there is always a day of “what ifs”. And on certain occasions, a giving of thanks for imagination and reality—the two often indistinguishable from each other—is of special note for many of us. (Image from Pinterest)

Sunday, June 20, 2021


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Precious For Some

 

 

Precious for some

Is the moment of touch,

The reaching into a brown paper bag

And lifting out a peach.

 

From what laden boughs

Had it come?

Arriving as it did

Via a roadside perch,

By a plain-Jane girl,

And a  crayoned sign,

“peaches”

 

Such was…

 

Waiting for the light.

The approach to the Brooklyn Bridge,

When the driver was offered

Humility and kindness,

Her asking nothing for the peach,

Save the obvious,

The gratuity of a smile

In return for her smile.

 

Her refusal of a dollar bill

Enjoins today the strange melancholy

Of that day’s roadside innocence.

 

Precious for some…

 

To imagine her as part

Of Nature’s  feeling and tenderness,

Coming all the way from an orchard,

To his tasting deeply,

Not only the skin,

The pulp,

But the tree shade,

The rains of nurturing,

Where sweetness was born,

Relayed via a young girl.

 

 

A maturity in kind,

Still smiling

As exhaust fumes plumed the air,

Clouding the purity

Of the happenstance

Of a peach,

A brown bag,

A maternal instinct

 Nudging adulthood generously

With love and benevolence.

 

Was it…

 

A messenger

From distant travel,

From blossom to blossom

To nurture further blossoms in the often

Resistant humankind?

 

Perhaps

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed on June 21, 2021
Now, Odin, I want a juicy peach! Ours should be ripened soon! I believe the girl was really a peak into a sliver of a peaceful world. 'So refreshing! ~~~~ ahhhhh, but, Odin.............the peach was real! Hmmmmmmmm......

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 21, 2021
This reads like a memoir of a wonderful experience that rarely would happen in a busy city. The free handout of a ripe peach.

Immediately, I thought of the times driving through the country and stopping to buy peaches by the roadside. So warm from the summer heat and so delicious to bite into with the juice running down sticky unless you were outside where it would fall to the ground.

And the peach always reminds me of a young woman's bottom With its softness and peach fuzz feel. (Sorry, I had a Freudian slip there)

Ron


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